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My moon

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My moon
Her beauty pierces through the most forbidding of darkness.
She radiates power.
The waves reach for her glory,
Then bow to her magnificence.
The predator howls for her blessing,
While her beauty leads the prey to safety.
Her love is strong,
And so is mine.
She is my life, my love,
She is my moon.

 
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what’chya think?

 
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There is no second level of meaning, add that.

 
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I don’t care for the use of the word ‘ugliest’ but the rest is quite good.

 
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Originally posted by qwerber:

There is no second level of meaning, add that.

actually there is. Im referring to her power,how she’s like a moon,and her beuty.
or you could actually think im talking about a moon.

Originally posted by 2CuteCaterpillar:

I don’t care for the use of the word ‘ugliest’ but the rest is quite good.

changed

 
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It is cool.