JudeMaverick
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For my birthday, my dad gave me a tablet (Made in China, damn it :()
Here’s a try with it (Go criticize it):

And try not to criticize the length of the hands. I know it’s ridiculous short but Ima lazy and if you can, gimme a tutorial on hands. Took me a hour to draw one damn hand :(
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Retron
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Very ugly. :)
Just kidding. If your good on paper, you’ll be good at Flash. Practice in school while the teacher is talking.
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JudeMaverick
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I’ll practice during my favorite class, Reading Language Arts (Or English) and the good thing is? Actually I do that every RLA class :)
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Nqkoi1
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Your best work(not a compliment) Happy BIRTHDAYNESS.
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Jindo
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> Practice in school while the teacher is talking.
Psht, I get away with it through out every lesson :3.
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Nqkoi1
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JudeMaverick
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After taking at a look at some background tutorials, I tried to make a perspective and landscape image:

Go ahead and criticize it :D
Credits: designing for blurred perspective being too blurred :D
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Nqkoi1
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I liked the light but for the grass you used a to bright colour
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JudeMaverick
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I did noticed that too after you said it. Maybe I should put the dark green around the outline and the light green be free but I’m lazy.
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Nqkoi1
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No just make the light green darker.
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Retron
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Jude, just keep at it. Your getting it. Another thing that I noticed is that something without outline looks better (for me) than something with outline. Try that. Hey, soon you could change your name to “Jindo2”. :D
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JudeMaverick
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What do you mean by outline? The whole outline of the hill? It looks seriously weird :O
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Nqkoi1
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Well Jude i havent seen any of your work without a tablet so i cant tell.
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Retron
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I mean the black line surrounding the hill. Dont erase it, though. Just draw w/o black line surrounding. Give it a try, see how you like it.
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Cloud_9ine
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one thing that would look cool, would be a dark dark green out line
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Cloud_9ine
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 By Cloud_9ine_art
a little randomness with my tablet…hopefull if i go to this academy next year, my parents will be forced to buy my a tablet lappy
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Cloud_9ine
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 By Cloud_9ine_art
pure PWNAGE!
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JudeMaverick
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Here’s the game scene for Jude MD: (I won’t tell you for now what the background is used for in the game because it spoils the fun >:) )

Criticize the background. (I might put some texture and depth into the grass)
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Cloud_9ine
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well you could of made the trees lumpy and then make the shadow lumpy it would have an overall pleasing look
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shadowac
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i can’t flash me only have paint sucky program… lol
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