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Writing feedback

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Aug 6, 2012 9:01pm conld 313 posts Flag Post	I would like some feedback on this story I wrote: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1H2gVFDXtcqkpwcY7OhIQv6yRWdlmMeDcAohkwZf8qWg/edit It has been edited several times, but I would like some critique on how to make this better because if no one gives me tips I can’t get better. Other writers may also post their stories to get feedback as well.

Aug 7, 2012 4:25am TheWhiteAngel 940 posts Flag Post	Uh… I don’t think you should really just pop your own story in the thread of someone else’s without any relevance whatsoever. LOL.

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