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Upon the molten wings of fury,
I lay my vengeance to the ground
And kill thy enemy inbound.
Justice served in a swift flurry.
Blood flows from broken veins,
Yet the haze of madness rises
As the body slowly crushes,
The ground it hits and feigns.
Tormenting evils of the past
Take hold of sense and mind
As the fury now is left behind.
They are in control of the mast.
And in this form i see new light,
Light which moves the raging dark
As i float aimlessly in my ark
In hopes to find a reason to fight.