Art drawings. page 3

Hi, I was wondering if you could make a slug ontop of a pile of snail corpses, and a sunset in the back. And if your fealing up to it maybe the word Slug in bold font. if this is too hard just tell me, I’ll be ok with it :)
btw I loved pics #1,#6, and #7.

I have to go to school now, but i’ll work on your guys avatars during the weekend :D
Btw thanks to Chad90 for the “Seal of Approval” and thanks to DarkChamelon for his great comment. You guys are so nice!
(Now, if only i could find a way to make that food real… Hmm)

Ninja:

If you don’t like the guy there, or if you don’t like the text, just tell me and i’ll get rid of it.

Chrome objects:

Sorry if they’re pixelized, if you don’t like it i could try to unpixelize it, but thanks to you, i learned a new skill!

+1 Skill: Pixelized.

Making the guitar and yours chad.

yeh … can you make them more realistic.. and seperate images?

Thank you for letting us have the privaliage to view your great work

good draws

some of the stuff is pretty cool, but also some other of the stuff i dont really see why you go that crazy about… much of the stuff is actually pretty easy to do… i guess most of those pics is about 10 mins of work!

request: a close up of a face. try to go to depth with it… i really think you would have great skills, if you would spend a little more time on your pics… also google some shading techniqes (spell? :S) for flash! i think some of your shades/highlights look a little odd!

anyway: keep up the great work ;)

could i just have a random helicopter for no reason

better way of doing chrome. i spent less than 5 minutes on this so obviously it could look better but you should be able to see why it would look better. note how the light reflects directly off the darker parts of the object and the edges of the object are not the darkest shade

really nice use of shadows, and highlights, to get a kinda toony realistic chrome effect :P

nice work sakket :P

thanks….. so…..

STOLEN! lol yeh i might use them. Thanks

art is communication. it’s very difficult, i must admit, to translate your intentions with most of this work. was it done with a mouse? the quality is quite basic, little to no color theory is being implemented…though the color work is possibly the most appealing aspect of the drawings. there is little clarity and no anatomy to the figures, the abstracts are basic in shape and form, reminiscent of scattered children’s puzzle pieces. light sources swell into shadow, which is completely illogical. first highlight, then mass tone, then shadow, then reflective light. this is how one develops form. reflective light is wholly absent, and the colors of forms lie completely unnaffected from eachother. drawings such as this would be valid if it were obvious that you had a thorough grasp of realism to work from. even simple drawings can possess intellectual aesthetic judgement.

now that the true crit is out of the way here is my opinion on your work. dude fix yourself. leave your computer now and grab a book grab a couple different sized boxes make yourself a still life and draw because you obviously have no concept of anything related to art. lets go down the list one by one on each piece. 1 what light source ever in your life have you seen make that shadow. i have seen strong light sources but that is only from a spotlight in a pitch black room. 3 your man has baby arms. stand up. look at yourself, so your arms stop at your belly button? and what is he holding a bloody water bottle? 4 LOOK AT YOUR DAMN ARMS!!!!!!!!!!! 5 dumplings dont live in space and they are definitly not devine. 6 look at graffiti if you want to shade like that. 7 when you enter water of what i assume is water does one eye pop out of your head and float on the surface? 8 kudos on the trifoce in this one. 9 see all the 2 and 6…stick figure man is floating disattached from his chair. the chair doesnt work with the table because there is no outline on the chair, it looks like he is floating on a red and white carpet above a sand mass being followed by sticks. the foam on the water should see more yellow….PAGE 2 your ninja would have lost that battle because once he would have come down from the air ATTEMPTING to kill the person he would have failed seeing as how the sord is already falling out of his hand at the peak of his jump. sword no that shape. LOOK AT YOUR DAMN BODY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!…PAGE 3 you are horrible at type

Must I follow you around chiding you for your “critique”? Seriously:

<extremely_rude_sentence>JUST FRIGGIN STOP POSTING THIS JUNK! THIS IS WORSE THEN THE ACTUAL ART YOU’RE TRYING TO CRITIQUE!!!!</extremely_rude_sentence>

if anybody is offended by the above sentence, I will remove it.

EvlAzn, what you’re saying that art has to be “realistic” and all artworks must not defy the principles of physics. While some of Ogt2’s drawings are indeed a bit off-the-proportion-acceptability, it’s meant to be cartoony/abstract.

Um… Yeah, EvlAzn. I got a few stuff to tell you…
1. Where’s your number two?
2. I’m making abstract art, not realistic. You know what abstract means right?
3. Are my eyes equipped with mirrors? No, so how do you want me to look at myself?
4. Where do you see a triforce?
5. I already saw my “DAMN BODY”
6. What dumplings?
7. I do art how I want to do it. Okay?
8. The ninja can do kung-fu moves, and the other guy got pwnt.
9. Learn how to type sword, or “sord” if you prefer.
10. “Sword no that shape” Please type a correct English sentence.
11. Normally you should of said: “You are horrible at typing”. That is not the case.
12. If you go on an unknown planet at 3000 galaxies from here, do you think the laws of light and reflection would be EXACTLY the same as Earth? I don’t think so.
13. If you can actually correct all those typing mistakes you made there, that would be one thing. If you don’t find any typing mistakes, look up every word in a dictionnairy.
14. Noob, you just got served.

Is that enough for you? Thank you for your “Extremely constructive” review on my art.

BET i just got served. dude let me tell you straight up i was trying to be nice but bump that im going all out now. you know what your stuff is S***. s*** is s*** no matter how you look at it. it is always brown lumpy and nasty so continue making whatever kind of art you want but when you actually know how to create a piece with some sort of substance then talk. you cant serve someone like that. you were just being defensive. thats not serving thats whining.

if aliens were looking at your work, then maybe they would like your nonsensical notion of physics, but since we’re all human here, let’s just accept that something is a little off about your light.

you can’t legitimately abstract something without knowing WHAT you’re abstracting. then you’re just making mistakes and pretending that it was purposeful for pure lack of knowledge. you don’t know what you’re doing unless you know how to do it, like previously mentioned.

if grammer is the ONLY thing you can legitimately hate on in my posts, then you’ve just proven my point.

I’m not sure why, but I’ve taken a liking to EA and therefore I’ll try to aid him in his defense this time.

I think his first comment was an adequate review. The first half was great, but the 2nd half was a little personal but he means it in the best of intentions I’m sure. Now for his second post, the first part is personal whilst the 2nd part is more “critique-styled”. But perhaps his rudeness can be explained by the response he had to a post that obviously required him to spend time examining your work.

We’re all entitled to our views and therefore in posting something on a public forum, you abide by the rule that it will be commented upon, wether positively or negatively. I’ve seen professional critiques about movies, music, art, etc. far worse than his, and yet still be largely legitimate.

I believe that if he maintains his usual final positive comment or view he won’t be taken so harshly, but even so, we’re all entitled to our opinions. If you won’t allow the bad you should not be granted the good.

~ Kryn

I guess your right Kryn.

I guess I owe you an apology EvlAzn, but your review seemed strange.

Man, last few comments were off. o.O
Anyways, Ogt i think your doing great with your art and i love the abstract ones.
i do have one request for a picture.
Can it be a stick dude ( like in picture #2, where he is not just a stick, but has a body and width.) and he has a Kongregate logo on him, and he is pouncing on another guy with “Kongregate Sucks” on him. The Kongregate dude can be stabbing the other guy in the chest or face.

BTW, i first saw your username on Armor Games.
Thanks!

Ogt2 you don’t have any exclusive rights to this topic, but you can keep trolling and think you do! :O

Did you draw these? Or find them on the internet drools

what the fuck is the point of this

yo evl, u wright bare

o.O what do you mean by that?

Here are a few drawings I FOUND