This thread is supposed to discuss Dreamstone 16: Enki's Dreamstone.
Here's the Dreamstone:
What the...? Where the Hells am I?
Damn... I musta been out a while. I’m losin' my mind out here. I swear... Ha'n't seen civ in an age an' a day.
Ha'n't seen the wife an' wee 'n in even longer. Not a day goes by when they ain't not on my mind.
Not that that does a whole lotta good, mind. Doesn’t reunite us, doesn't make her happy, doesn't nothin'.
Some waste o' space I turned out to be. Not exactly father material, seems like.
Family life's not for me, I thought. I can't just leave my responsibilities behind, I thought, as it's not in my nature.
Then, to see those responsibilities, I went an'... left my responsibilities behind.
Eh, they'll live 'til I'm back. They're survivors. I made sure a' that.
Even if I –have- been gone an angel's age longer than anticipated...
I'd been getting too settled in when my homeland needs me. I won't let some damned –accident-, some will-o'-the-stars, run my whole life! I just won't, dammit!
I'll change it all, I thought, I'll make it right. So here I am.
Here I am, out in the godsdamned frozen wilderness, blindly fumbling along this icy troll's gnarly backbone, lone as an eagle, tryin' to find some doodah or gizmo that'll get me home.
I know there's one 'round here somewhere. I've heard the tales, and colour me gullible an' green as a wet 'n, but them sorts a' tales don't lie, says a hunch big enough to ring bells with.
I can but wonder what kind a' mess those yoon-eyed invaders have run up back home while I've idled, but I'll be damned if I'll let them corrupt us any more than they've done.
They mayn't a' rained fire and brimstone from the heavens, but they sure as Hell took over, with a smile in their eye and a chummy waggle a' the ol' grabber, aye, but an invasion it was, an invasion it was...
Heh. The boy's face when he’ll know... It'll be a riot.
He'll have grown up now, good an' fine. Let's hope he's looked after the ol' doll in his pa's absence, eh? He's a good 'n, he'll have done it. He’s one a' mine.
My pa wasn't never there for me neither, and I turned out just fine. Hmph.
It shaped me, and I won't let him grow up no sissy. This is good for us all, what I'm doin'. He’ll see in the end. But where in SHAN's name am I?! It's might frigid out there: I must a' passed out 'n' been brought back here, this warm hut...
Let's hope it’s a benefactor and not the 'ma-le' kind. But if Lady Luck's stood up on me again this day, capricious trollop she is, I've still got fight in me, let 'em come.
I'll fight through whatever it takes, 'til I get that giz-dah and the goldfish shines once more.
Then I can make everything right. Then I can be redeemed.
Guess who "recorded" that Dreamstone? *Mardek's Father, and Lilanea's husband, Enki Ea'seph El-Regis!*
Alright, part-by-part analysis:
What the...? Where the Hells am I?
Damn... I musta been out a while. I’m losin' my mind out here. I swear... Ha'n't seen civ in an age an' a day.
He hasn't seen any cities in a long time. This means he's not on Hadris or Fengue. This leaves Tharadia and Nole'Oth. Since he has been seen on Nole'Oth, this (obviously) means that he's in Nole'Oth.
Ha'n't seen the wife an' wee 'n in even longer. Not a day goes by when they ain't not on my mind.
Not that that does a whole lotta good, mind. Doesn’t reunite us, doesn't make her happy, doesn't nothin'.
Some waste o' space I turned out to be. Not exactly father material, seems like.
He says he's no good father or husband here, but he still cares for them deeply.
Family life's not for me, I thought. I can't just leave my responsibilities behind, I thought, as it's not in my nature.
Then, to see those responsibilities, I went an'... left my responsibilities behind.
Eh, they'll live 'til I'm back. They're survivors. I made sure a' that.
Well, he says that he's sure that they will be safe until he's back. He's also regretting leaving them.
Even if I –have- been gone an angel's age longer than anticipated...
Of course. +11 years.
I'd been getting too settled in when my homeland needs me. I won't let some damned –accident-, some will-o'-the-stars, run my whole life! I just won't, dammit!
Aha! This part is complicated. As you know, Belfan has an unusual gravitational pull, as seen in chapter 1... When Rohoph's ship crashed near the Sothwood. Enki's spaceship must have crashed too. Why? You never know. But how do we know that he HAS a spaceship in the first place?
I'll change it all, I thought, I'll make it right. So here I am.
Here I am, out in the godsdamned frozen wilderness, blindly fumbling along this icy troll's gnarly backbone, lone as an eagle, tryin' to find some doodah or gizmo that'll get me home.
"Frozen Wilderness" means "Nole'Oth." He's in the Backbone of a frozen troll, right? Attempting to find a gizmobob or doodah. What's that? The Gizmometer.
I know there's one 'round here somewhere. I've heard the tales, and colour me gullible an' green as a wet 'n, but them sorts a' tales don't lie, says a hunch big enough to ring bells with.
He thinks the Gizmometer is in Nole'Oth. That's why he's there. For eleven+ goddammed years.
I can but wonder what kind a' mess those yoon-eyed invaders have run up back home while I've idled, but I'll be damned if I'll let them corrupt us any more than they've done.
Yoon-Eyed. One-Eyed. What race so far has one eye? And that has been corrupted? Yeah, you do the math.
They mayn't a' rained fire and brimstone from the heavens, but they sure as Hell took over, with a smile in their eye and a chummy waggle a' the ol' grabber, aye, but an invasion it was, an invasion it was...
Heh. The boy's face when he’ll know... It'll be a riot.
The Annunaki took over Enki's home planet.
He'll have grown up now, good an' fine. Let's hope he's looked after the ol' doll in his pa's absence, eh? He's a good 'n, he'll have done it. He’s one a' mine.
Mardek.
My pa wasn't never there for me neither, and I turned out just fine. Hmph.
It shaped me, and I won't let him grow up no sissy. This is good for us all, what I'm doin'. He’ll see in the end. But where in SHAN's name am I?! It's might frigid out there: I must a' passed out 'n' been brought back here, this warm hut...
He was in a hut all along. Also, have you noticed how he said "where in SHAN's name am I?!" This just encourages the theory that he's not from Belfan. So SHAN must be a god like YALORT.
Let's hope it’s a benefactor and not the 'ma-le' kind. But if Lady Luck's stood up on me again this day, capricious trollop she is, I've still got fight in me, let 'em come.
I'll fight through whatever it takes, 'til I get that giz-dah and the goldfish shines once more.
Then I can make everything right. Then I can be redeemed.
Goldfish = The broken ship at Xantusia. You can figure out the rest yourself.