Everybody Edits, The Game | Chapter 10: Thirdy and Iceknight

EE, The Game

This story is about a boy who entered the game, Everybody Edits. Watch him as he face the 20 androids, 5 devil lords and the creators of Everybody Edits to make the game work as well again.

Chapter 1: Roar of Lightning
It was lightly raining for twelve hours. I was bored and had read every book I bought. I went up upstairs and I found an ad and I was interested on it. The name of the website was “Kongregate”. I stayed in it and there was a player who soon linked in the chat to a game. I clicked on it and it redirected me to a game. It was loading so slow so I went into another game another player gave me. It had a smiley and was named “Come here for free money!”, I clicked on it. My mom soon was looking for me because she wanted me to clean the house. I ignored her and then there was a big roar of lightning. Another one roared again and in a few seconds all I saw was white. I closed my eyes and fell asleep. I was awoken by a smiley.

Chapter 2: Robbers And Docs
I woke up in a hospital. “Hello, I am DeadHero”, “I saw you severely injured and wanted to help”, he said. I screamed in pain and the patients, nurses and doctors fell silent. There was a doctor who came to help me. A bolt of lightning struct on me. I saw its reflection and then…. I am a smiley! I freaked out. “Argh! Why..Why am I a smiley?”, I said. I left and thanked the doctors after then. I soon went into a road then I saw there were lots of people. Some were playing minigames, Some were building buildings. Soon, on my right, there was a bank. There were two robbers. Asedrfffffffffffff and Iceknight22. I said “Stop!”. They were getting lots and lots of coins. I noticed that I dont have a name yet. Soon, they asked me to get in the car and heed to be killed by their master.

Chapter 3: Escaping Rampage
I found ways to escape as I was dragged to the jail. Asedrfffffffffffff and Iceknight22 were calling Stevenfox75. I was worried. There was a glass, a chicken bone so I waited for them to leave. They soon left me so I broke the glass and tried to sharpen the chicken bone. I was about to throw the sharpened chicken bone because the key
was there. I threw it, it hit! Yes. I was about to get the key with some items found then some SWAT rescued me. Their leader, AiK2, helped me escape when he made some kind of portal leading to the mainland. I was relieved. Soon, some rampage in the down happened. There was a guy named Benjaminsen who looked like a superman smiley with a steel-like hat. His eyes were glowing red. A guy names aaro54 used some kind of god mode so we can escape to another place. What is happening?

Chapter 4: Evil Is Happening
Aaro54 said that this was weird. I asked why. He said that the one who rampaged us was the creator of the game. He started to make blocks and left me here and said that he will gather people. Soon, a troll named drakekiller123 removed the block force-feild and the battle was on. AndreiTan tried to catch Benjaminsen and defeat him. Benjaminsen used telepathic teleportation to get some smileys in New Block City. Soon, AndreiTan got me, and he passed it to Aoitenshi so we will fly off to “Codeland”. Where I can get code and help others defeat Benjaminsen. We were about to fly, when a special bubble trapped us. We even tried to get off this bubble. It is all up to AndreiTan now and to defeat drakekiller123.

Chapter 5: Drake, Android 1 [Part 1]
We tried to escape, but it would not happen. I tried to scream for help that neither Aaro56
nor that guy who looked like a ninja and can jump very high, higher than the bubble itself. He was named prinny156. So with Aoitenshi, we discovered drake that he was controlled by ben. That is why he is so hard. So Andrei used a light cage but since drake is an android, he has no weakness nor weak spot. Andrei then used a gate and door thing trap. What? He broke through it! But I didnt know he was using a blue key bomb in the sky. He used it, breaking his first degree armor. 2 left. He began to drain the god mode of Andrei. Nooo! But Andrei raged. He kept throwing portal bombs draining the second armor by a quarter.

Chapter 6: Drake, Android 1 [Part 2]
Now Aaro56 came and AndreiTan combined some door and portal creating a nuke. It hit, but only a quarter broke. It came and drained Aaro. A quarter remained when he used a self-destruct. Destroying himself and destroying the second degree of armor Drake had, and both his energy absorbing hands. Andrei used a revolver, but that was not an ordinary revolver. It was the Revolver of Madness, a gun which reloads at a milisecond, is very light, and can shoot very powerful. He raged and hit him twice, leaving half the final armor. He raged and used punches 3-4.5x speed. Drake blocked some, but it broke the last armor.

Chapter 7: Android Avenge!
The bubble broke and Aoitenshi flew, giving god mode to Andrei. They both used special “Contamination” blocks. It contaminated the insides of him, breaking him into pieces. He finally said, “I will ki- kill yo—-u. My—- Bro—-” I didnt know what the meant, then Andrei quickly blocked me. "Gio, we need you to have God Mode immidiately. I have a sense that his brothers will avenge him. Aoitenshi gave me a sword and a CLMG. Codeland Mile Generator, which tracks how many miles do we have to go to codeland, where I will be getting my god powers. AndreiTan and me flew off, and rested in an inn. We will be resting there for the next day of adventure.

Chapter 8: Meet Thirdy, Android 2
We got up late and paid DragonOfWar some muffins we got. He gave us muffins in change. That was weird. We packed our luggage when we heard a noise. It was another android! We tried to hit it, he was a lot tougher than the first android, drakekiller. Three guys came with us. The first one was Iceknight22, Iceknight? He fought with us! Along with him was Alexislag and the owner DragonOfWar. He was also a fighter? I knew the fight will be epic. So Android #2 introduced himself as Thirdy, the next android and he told us that there are 20 androids and 7 leaders. Whoa. “Were gonna need some backup if we want to kill it”, said DragonOfWar.

Chapter 9: The Battle Of Android 2
Now since I didnt have my powers yet, the three of them fought thirdy. Andrei kept punching and only a small crack happened. Alexislag threw a guy named chaosdrapichu, which instead was absorbed….we were scared. Iceknight began to throw spikes of ice which we found out then was his weakness. I nearly got killed when a fireball was shot from Thirdy to me, but when Alex sacrificed by self destructing himself, we broke a layer of his armor. He was a good friend. Thirdy then prepared a raging blast to us. Andrei also used his Gun Of Madness. Both of them shot at the same time.

Chapter 10: Thirdy and Iceknight
The gun of madness tied with the raging blast, but then Andrei’s power was weakened due to an ice blast. Iceknight froze Andrei! He betrayed us! Since I cant do anything, I got to cover. Andrei was outnumbered 2-1. He activated a special attack. He was glowing red and had red flashy eyes. He broke Iceknight’s glacier and with my trusty sword I slammed Iceknight in half at the same time with Andrei. He was screaming loudly, loud enough. Then Thirdy disappeared? Andrei was looking when..I saw him coming. “Andrei, watch out!”, I said. Luckily, he dodged it due to my warning. Phew.

NOW ANDREI, USE THE GUN OF MADNESS, BEFORE ITS TOO LATE!

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I will be updating chapters every tuesday, thursday and sunday. The rest are not because I have my taekwondo class. [Will be sparring in 3 weeks]

EE name : Stevenfox75
Appearance : Top Hat with monocle. .
Personality : Cheerful and gweedy(incase you’re wondering, greedy).

Don’t make me feel stupid. :3

EE Name:Iceknight22
Appearance:Coy smiley or robboer (the smiley depends on what you want)
Personality:wants to play every rpg XD and happy

EE Name: DeadHero
Apperance: Smiley with shades.
Personality: Relaxed and doesn’t care about much stuff.

EE Name: A1k2
Appearance: Commando smiley/ Normal smiley
Personality: —Classified—

EE name:aaro54
Appreance:fire wizard
Personality: Likes rpgs

EE name:Asedrfffffffffffff
apperance:robber.
Personality:play levels or make levels

Chapter 2 Released!
Note that I havent included these people on the list.

• AiK2 (Will play as one of the SWAT- Smiley War Achievement Team)
• Stevenfox75 (Will play as robber’s leader)
• aaro54 (Will join me as his mate)

Note that you will be in the next chapter so dont worry!

P.S. I only include 4-5 people per chapter

Sweet chapter, but you changed to present tense at the end of the second chapter.

Lul, it’s nice to partake some interesting roles.

Originally posted by michaelan:

Sweet chapter, but you changed to present tense at the end of the second chapter.

Originally posted by stevefox74:

Lul, it’s nice to partake some interesting roles.

Originally posted by michaelan:

Sweet chapter, but you changed to present tense at the end of the second chapter.

What happened to ur story?

Got bored.

I assure you, your story is RIDDLED with errors, and they are all EXTREMELY bothersome. The one that most bothers me and I’d like to point out to you is that you claim to have seen your reflection on a bolt of lightning. A) A bolt of lightning would’ve been much too fast for you to have made out anything on the surface of, unless being a smiley also came with superhuman vision. B) Lightning is not glass, it’s a plasma. You can’t see your reflection on it, just like you can’t see your reflection on the sun.

Good day.

Originally posted by dootdootdoot:

I assure you, your story is RIDDLED with errors, and they are all EXTREMELY bothersome. The one that most bothers me and I’d like to point out to you is that you claim to have seen your reflection on a bolt of lightning. A) A bolt of lightning would’ve been much too fast for you to have made out anything on the surface of, unless being a smiley also came with superhuman vision. B) Lightning is not glass, it’s a plasma. You can’t see your reflection on it, just like you can’t see your reflection on the sun.

Good day.

XD

Chapter 3 Released!

• Included remaining persons
• Needing some applicants
• Added new “side”. [Good people needed]

Doot. If you were reading my stories and hate it, why stop reading it and go do some sh*t?

EE name:drakekiller0123
Appearance:werewolf
Personality:likes to bully kids
Side:Evil

EE Name: Aoitenshi
Apperance: Blue Wizzie
Personality: “Uhhuh” is this fav word.
[New!] Side: Neutralism.

EE Name: AndreiTan2000
Appearance: Ninja, Templar, Commando. Depends and changes anytime.
Personality: Calm and angry at the same time, brave and can fight with any weapon, EE-Ninja-like and can finish almost any minigame, mind that can build worlds with special mechs.
[New!] Side: Neutral-good.

Originally posted by gio500:

Chapter 3 Released!

• Included remaining persons
• Needing some applicants
• Added new “side”. [Good people needed]

Doot. If you were reading my stories and hate it, why stop reading it and go do some sh*t?

I really didn’t get chapter 3 at all.
and no, i didn’t dislike your story.

Originally posted by gio500:

Chapter 3 Released!

• Included remaining persons
• Needing some applicants
• Added new “side”. [Good people needed]

Doot. If you were reading my stories and hate it, why stop reading it and go do some sh*t?

I don’t get some of it. Nice job in making a story though.

Originally posted by gio500:

Chapter 3 Released!

• Included remaining persons
• Needing some applicants
• Added new “side”. [Good people needed]

Doot. If you were reading my stories and hate it, why stop reading it and go do some sh*t?

…You said “why stop reading it” as in, you are asking him why he is not reading it instead of telling him to stop reading it.

Originally posted by dootdootdoot:

I assure you, your story is RIDDLED with errors, and they are all EXTREMELY bothersome. The one that most bothers me and I’d like to point out to you is that you claim to have seen your reflection on a bolt of lightning. A) A bolt of lightning would’ve been much too fast for you to have made out anything on the surface of, unless being a smiley also came with superhuman vision. B) Lightning is not glass, it’s a plasma. You can’t see your reflection on it, just like you can’t see your reflection on the sun.

Good day.

If you stare at the sun hard enough, you can see your reflection :D (…try it >:3)

Originally posted by michaelan:

Originally posted by gio500:

Chapter 3 Released!

• Included remaining persons
• Needing some applicants
• Added new “side”. [Good people needed]

Doot. If you were reading my stories and hate it, why stop reading it and go do some sh*t?

…You said “why stop reading it” as in, you are asking him why he is not reading it instead of telling him to stop reading it.

+1

Originally posted by gio500:

This story is about a boy who entered the game, Everybody Edits.

Chapter 1
It was lightly raining for 12 hours. I was bored and had read every book I bought. I went up upstairs and I found an ad and I was interested on it. The name of the website was “Kongregate”. I stayed in it and there was a player who soon linked in the chat to a game. I clicked on it and it redirected me to a game. It was loading so slow so I went into another game another player gave me. It had a smiley and was named “Come here for free money!”, I clicked on it. My mom soon was looking for me because she wanted me to clean the house. I ignored her and then there was a big roar of lightning. Another one roared again and in a few seconds all I saw was white. I closed my eyes and fell asleep. I was awakened by a smiley

Chapter 2:
I woke up in a hospital. “Hello, I am DeadHero”, “I saw you severely injured and wanted to help”, he said. I screamed in pain and the patients, nurses and doctors fell silent. There was a doctor who came to help me. A bolt of lightning struct on me. I saw its reflection and then…. I am a smiley! I freaked out. “Argh! Why..Why am I a smiley?”, I said. I left and thanked the doctors after then. I soon went into a road then I saw there were lots of people. Some were playing minigames, Some were building buildings. Soon, on my right, there was a bank. There were two robbers. Asedrfffffffffffff and Iceknight22. I said “Stop!”. They were getting lots and lots of coins. I noticed that I dont have a name yet. Soon, they asked me to get in the car and heed to be killed by their master.

Chapter 3
I found ways to escape as I was dragged to the jail. Asedrfffffffffffff and Iceknight22 were calling Stevenfox75. I was worried. There was a glass, a chicken bone so I waited for them to leave. They soon left me so I broke the glass and tried to sharpen the chicken bone. I was about to throw the sharpened chicken bone because the key
was there. I threw it, it hit! Yes. I was about to get the key with some items found then some SWAT rescued me. Their leader, AiK2, helped me escape when he made some kind of portal leading to the mainland. I was relieved. Soon, some rampage in the down happened. There was a guy named Benjaminsen who looked like a superman smiley with a steel-like hat. His eyes were glowing red. A guy names aaro54 used some kind of god mode so we can escape to another place. What is happening?

Chapter 4
We emerged into a small stairway and we headed along a small tunnel to escape the mayhem above. We came across some stairs and we dashed up them, three steps at a time. We saw a bright light shining in the distance and we hurried our pace. We emerged from the cave opening and bright light beamed from above, nearly blinding us. “We’re free!” I screamed with excitement. Then, we saw a figure and my happiness was quenched by fear. Hundreds of smileys littered the area the size of a football field. Their eyes glowed a red shade of death and they betrayed no sense of mercy or fear. They were hungry, hungry for death. We retreated into a defensive stance and braced ourselves, even though we all knew the futility of the action. We were going to die here. Death had always been a strange thing to me. I had always feared death, yet here I was, about to fight a helpless battle right when we were on the brink of escape. I was not afraid. I no longer feared death, because there was no way to avoid it. I looked around me seeing my allies, my comrades, and my friends. I turned back to the enemy and thought, No regrets. I let out a ferocious battle cry and charged across the field into the face of the enemy. I was gonna die, but I as sure hell was also going to bring down a load of people down with me.

Originally posted by gio500:

To be continued.

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Im sad. I think I am a useless creator of a story. I hate it, I think I will continue, but surely will not if more complaints happen.

XD

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EE Name: fredgreg
Apperance: ninja/comando/thief/cyborg
Personality anger issues sometimes.
[New!] Side: Good/Nuetral.

Chapter 4 Released!

• I will be accepting roles later. I need to finish the battle.
• Special roles added to my friends.
• Erased some side, may include in “Personality”.