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some tips for your game,
make a timer and time limit so you only have 1 minute. the closer you click to the midle the more points. If you miss a target you lose points. make some targets slide across the screen.
Do those and it would be a decent first game!
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First off, change the colours. You *can't* look at it. I like gray as background, as it allows you to see all colours, including white.
Second, a game has to have a purpose. This one does not. I can click and click until I die, no gameover, no win, no nothing.
Third, as you may have noticed, games like this don't get a very good reception. Try waiting until you have something really good to deliver. Why don't I have the developer icon? I don't rush.
Fourth, I know it's hard for some people - being one of them - but try to improve on graphics and add some sound. A game with good visual is a lot better than one without, even if it is completely rubbish.
Good luck making games. You'll need it, it *is* hard.
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guys be a bit nice it's his first game if you think its so horrible just say what you think that needs to be changed and things that need to be added.
I think its a great starter for your first game but jeah it still need a lot of improvements.
4/5 for the effort keep it up.
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I am working on the game... i now have timer, difficults, more points as harder it gets.. now i do only need to upgrade the graphic.
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Horrible game. As bobbias said, why upload it here? It makes no sense: millions of people could potentially mock you and your inadequate programming skills. I could make a game better than this on my TI-84 Plus(and I have), and it's a calculator run on Visual Basic. If you're going to make something for here, make it decent.
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this is a beta of a kind.. i am working on a menu and timer.
But i will need to upload that upgrade as a new upgrade, cause the rating is so bad. I should not upload beta on Kongregate... I just thought that then i could send a link to my friends, but i had no idea of how many plays there would be...
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i think Bobbias nailed your review. add a timer and we have an ok start to a game. also might want to have an end to the game, its not completely open-ended is it?
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oh my god what a bad terrible game oh god seriously oh god it still hasnt hit me yet this game is so bad wow what a horrible horrible game ok its starting to hit me yes this game is awful terrible caca
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Why did you even upload it here? Sure, it's a great starter for learning flash, but really, does it need to be online where millions of people can make fun of your useless "game"? Maybe you should do something, like add a timer that tells you how many milliseconds you took to click the target, and track the fastest time through the game. That way you'd learn a bit more about flash, and give us something that was at least a bit more like a real game.
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The creation of simplistic games is a necessary step of the learning process.
However, uploading said games is just asking to get blasted out of the water. Good luck in the future, but please do add something to it before you upload again.