Comments for Fractured

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MadHatter26th

Jan. 17, 2013

Under rating threshold (show) Absolutely fantastic. Talk about having to need a good grip on spacial relations. I love the scattered puzzle feel, having to watch all the pieces as you hop around to find out where it all fits, being upside down one moment and sideways the next. Well done!

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Developer response from GroZZleR

I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thank you very much.

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danishgoel

Jan. 17, 2013

Under rating threshold (show) loved the game. Great concept and equally great execution.

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Developer response from GroZZleR

Thank you very much.

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DryCrustyBlood

Jan. 17, 2013

Under rating threshold (show) Clever game. Enjoyable. Mixture of try and fail exploration and logically putting pieces together in your head.

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Developer response from GroZZleR

Thanks. Glad you enjoyed it.

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Dahlaa

Jan. 17, 2013

Under rating threshold (show) Surely one of the most creative concepts I've seen for a long time. Would be even greater if WASD worked ;)

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Developer response from GroZZleR

Thank you for your kind words. *Update* WASD should now work properly again.

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Zachbrew

Jan. 17, 2013

Under rating threshold (show) Very few platformers have such good controls and even fewer hold such an emotional feel, everything is perfect. 10/10

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Developer response from GroZZleR

Thank you very much. You're too kind.

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stewbasic

Jan. 25, 2013

Under rating threshold (show) Small suggestion: Once the game is completed, have some option to see the whole poem? I was too focused on the puzzles and didn't remember the lines. Anyway I liked the mechanic :).

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Developer response from GroZZleR

Thanks. Glad you enjoyed it.

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blackjack666

Jan. 18, 2013

Under rating threshold (show) Its a nice game, but I would have liked to hear the poem all in one go at the end, rather than only as fragmented peices.

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Developer response from GroZZleR

I'm glad you enjoyed it. I'm considering changing the ending a bit to feature the whole poem from all the requests.

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arakunewrath

Jan. 21, 2013

Under rating threshold (show) Such a great game! It's spatial reasoning aspect made it a nice refreshing change to the average platform game. The story fragments were a real clever addition and made the title "Fractured" even more validated and added a sort of reward for solving the puzzle. The story was short, yet held such emotion! One of my favorite games! 5/5

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Developer response from GroZZleR

You're very kind. Thank you very much.

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Ragnel

Jan. 22, 2013

Under rating threshold (show) SPOILER!!!! I hope an pray that I will find the child that I have left behind. For as I hear the madness gloat, a frightened scream rips from my throat. A childs love with blind ambition, against my panicked admonition. Into the heart of evil's lair, I battle on without despair. And search and wander as I might, I see no ending to my plight. There is no point in searching more, for I'm the one he's searching for. Beautiful.

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Developer response from GroZZleR

I'm sure others will appreciate this. Thank you.

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Cbkwak

Jan. 21, 2013

Under rating threshold (show) Great refreshing new mechanic for a platformer! The only thing that bugged me a bit is that it seems that you recorded the poem in individual sound files, one for each level, rather than recording it all in one go and splitting it from there. The poem loses the flow it should have, and thus, a lot of the beauty of the rhythm and sound of the poem is lost. Even if it's done deliberately as part of the Fractured metaphor, I submit that the game loses little by redoing the recording for those lines of poetry, but gains so much beauty.

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Developer response from GroZZleR

They were indeed done as separate takes. I really like how disjointed it becomes. Every line has its own little inflection and meaning completely different from the last. I'm glad you picked up on that; very keen.

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reject5k90

Jan. 19, 2013

Under rating threshold (show) anyone else take random leaps of faith?

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Developer response from GroZZleR

I hope not! Look for clues in the backgrounds like cut in half posters to help piece the world together.

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theguy322

Jan. 22, 2013

Under rating threshold (show) Really... a never before seen puzzle mechanic? We'll just see about th- OHMYGOD WHAT IS THIS.

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Developer response from GroZZleR

It's a pretty bold claim and I'm happy to have backed it up. Glad you enjoyed it.

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warrior1155

Jan. 18, 2013

Under rating threshold (show) I'm at a loss for words, this game, to put it simply, is beautiful. I just love it. Please keep making more games.

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Developer response from GroZZleR

I'm glad you enjoyed it. You're very kind. Thank you.

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aslan132

Jan. 18, 2013

Under rating threshold (show) Fantastic original idea. I love the gameplay, especially the sideways and upside down levels. Wish there was more of those. Maybe add some more to the bonus levels at the end. +10 for innovation

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Developer response from GroZZleR

The upside down ones are my favourite too. Thanks for playing.

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xsoni

Jan. 18, 2013

Under rating threshold (show) Fantastic execution! Complete poem at the end would be even worth a sixth star!!!

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Developer response from GroZZleR

Glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for playing.

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ThePIT

Jan. 20, 2013

Under rating threshold (show) -- SPOILER -- Poem: I hope and pray that i will find the child that i have left behind for as i hear the madness gloat a frightened scream rips from my throat a child's love, with blind ambition against my panicked admonition into the heart of evil's lair i battle on, without despair and search and wander as i might i see no ending to my plight there is no point is searching more for i'm the one he's searching for -- SPOILER --

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Developer response from GroZZleR

I'm sure someone will appreciate this. Thanks for taking the time.

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KILLERMA

Jan. 22, 2013

Under rating threshold (show) A back to menu button would be nice. Oh, and the option to hear the poem once we've finished would be fantastic ;)

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Developer response from GroZZleR

I've sent you a PM with the entire poem, sorry if you missed it. Thanks for playing.

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Nude_Hotdog

Jan. 20, 2013

Under rating threshold (show) I rarely feel the need to comment on games, but what you've created here is simply a work of art. Beautiful looking artwork with perfectly fitting sounds and music. Whoever did the voice acting for telling the story did a wonderful job as well. At first I found myself mildly frustrated by the disorientation of transitioning upside down, but after adjusting to it this game become apparent to be a much needed relaxing breath of fresh air in an era of overtly saturated genres. Simple design, yet extremely elegant. Thank you for this masterpiece. I look forward to seeing what create in the future.

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Developer response from GroZZleR

Wow. Thank you very much. I'm glad you enjoyed the game on such a level and I'll make sure to pass along your compliments to the voice actress and the audio engineer.

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talamori

Jan. 20, 2013

Under rating threshold (show) great game. I actually wrote the poem down as it was that captivating.

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Developer response from GroZZleR

That makes me smile. Thank you.

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king93khan

Jan. 20, 2013

Under rating threshold (show) The game made Me realized how much relations are important and that we have to make the most of them while they last.Great game.

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Developer response from GroZZleR

That's powerful stuff. I'm glad you had such a connection with the game. Thank you.

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alaeha

Jan. 19, 2013

Under rating threshold (show) I enjoy the concepts (both gameplay and narrative) a great deal. I was able to find my way around by either analyzing the shapes of the pieces or occasionally by simply dancing on the edge of my current piece until I figured out where it connected -- and there's something to be said for the image of a boy whose world has literally been shattered trying to find his mother. The music suits it, the sound syncs up well, and the graphics are nicely done. On a mechanical level, the game handles nicely, though the ceilings have an obnoxious habit of hanging too low and cutting off my jumps. 4 Stars, and I'll be watching you.

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Developer response from GroZZleR

Thanks. Hitting your hit is definitely annoying. That's a problem with Flash games some times, I had to make the world 500x500 to fit inside a 600x600 Flash window. If I could've made the screen bigger, a lot more would have been possible. Thanks for playing.

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satorian

Jan. 17, 2013

Under rating threshold (show) Very innovative. I just wish the creator and I shared the same taste in poetry...

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Developer response from GroZZleR

Thank you for playing / Sorry you disliked the poem / Enjoy this haiku.

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tmh95

Mar. 13, 2013

Under rating threshold (show) I want the poem to be available to be heard/read after the game is over.

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Developer response from GroZZleR

So have many others, heh. Lesson learned.

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Charis688

Jan. 22, 2013

Under rating threshold (show) needs badges

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Developer response from GroZZleR

That's up to Kongregate to decide.

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gamergirl236

Jan. 22, 2013

Under rating threshold (show) I hope and pray that I will find The child that I have left behind For as I hear the madness gloat A frightened scream rips from my throat A child's love, with blind ambition Against my paniced admonition Into the heart of evil's lair I battle on, without dispair And search and wander as I might I see no ending to my plight There is no point in searching more For I'm the one he's searching for

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Developer response from GroZZleR

Hopefully no one reads this before playing the game. Thank you for transcribing it.

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Rokjah

Jan. 20, 2013

Under rating threshold (show) although a very good concept and very functional, innovative platforming, the story just felt lacking. something was just missing, i cant explain what, but it needed just something more

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Developer response from GroZZleR

The story is definitely subtle. I didn't want it to overpower the mechanic itself. I'm glad you enjoyed it though.

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PapaBear518

Jan. 17, 2013

Under rating threshold (show) I was wishing that I could read the dialogue at the end, all together... or hear it! Lots track of the parts as some of the levels took me some time to get through. Great game. Lots of heart.

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Developer response from GroZZleR

I've sent you a message with the entire poem. Thanks for playing and I'm glad you enjoyed it.

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xandramas

Jan. 17, 2013

Under rating threshold (show) interesting concept

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Developer response from GroZZleR

Thanks for playing.

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axzes

Jan. 19, 2013

Under rating threshold (show) God, this thing is a bit depressing.... -_-

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Developer response from GroZZleR

My favourite aspect is how the music slowly strips away until only a howling wind is left.

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Zag24

Jan. 18, 2013

Under rating threshold (show) Very clever! It's been a while since I've seen a NEW idea. You not only have one, but you've executed it quite well. In the second or third bonus round, I was a little put off by the jump that you can only make if you walk out to nearly the last pixel before jumping, well past where intuition says you should have fallen. Other than that, I really like the game. I love the ones where just jumping around won't get you there, you really have to figure it all out.

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Developer response from GroZZleR

Ooo yeah, that jump is pretty cheeky. Sorry about that. Glad you enjoyed the rest of the game and saw it all the way through.

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mitico1789

Jan. 18, 2013

Under rating threshold (show) it's good idea to use your hat for find what's the next point you will appear

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Developer response from GroZZleR

Yep. Watch out for cut in half trees, posters and even lamp posts too.

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momoiscool

Jan. 18, 2013

Under rating threshold (show) Great game, great music, and great concept. It's really nice to see something new and unique, especially when its all put together in such a nice way. Keep up the good work ^^.

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Developer response from GroZZleR

Thank you. I'm very happy with what it's become. It's going to be hard to live up to.

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diestarbucks

Jan. 18, 2013

Under rating threshold (show) Really great game. Well thought out and put together. I wasn't sure what to expect when I clicked on it, but I am really glad I did.

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Developer response from GroZZleR

I'm glad you enjoyed your unexpected journey.

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johnny1206

Jan. 22, 2013

Under rating threshold (show) Wow. This is one of the most original concept after Continuity! :D

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Developer response from GroZZleR

Thanks! That means a lot.

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Cyfir

Jan. 17, 2013

Under rating threshold (show) Good game. Would have liked it to pause-until-click after showing each levels completed puzzle. Loved the creepy poem and music.

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Developer response from GroZZleR

And here I was worried the transitions were too long, heh. Thanks for playing.

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Sleepingpill

Feb. 11, 2013

Under rating threshold (show) Oh, and you need to recap the poem! I had too loud music on at first, and well, my memory is rubbish so I wouldn't remember it through doing puzzles anyhoo, but I want to see it after I play, so for the next game add the poem at the end ;)

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Developer response from GroZZleR

I'll PM you the poem or you can check out the comments for it. Sorry about that.

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viaco12

Jan. 22, 2013

Under rating threshold (show) That was pretty neat. I think it's interesting when you finish each level and the pieces sit themselves together, and as it turns out, it would have been an insanely easy task had they been oriented right in the first place. Scattering the pieces like that makes things a lot harder than you would think. Good work, man.

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Developer response from GroZZleR

Thank you. I'm really glad I added that too.

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Firstlicker

Jan. 22, 2013

Under rating threshold (show) Needs Badges Please. D: and 5/5

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Developer response from GroZZleR

That's not up to me, unfortunately.

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skydreamer42

Jan. 21, 2013

Under rating threshold (show) A metaphor for the shattered mind of a child who has lost his mother. Very deep. Excellent gameplay. Tragic poetry. Never has a platformer made my eyes moist with emotion. Thank You.

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Developer response from GroZZleR

I'm happy you connected so well with it. Thank you for sharing this.

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Phil1542Top4

Jan. 22, 2013

Under rating threshold (show) Dis... game... too... saaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaad =''''''(

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Developer response from GroZZleR

It's fun to explore your feelings some times. I'm glad you connected with it. Thank you.

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tmh95

Mar. 13, 2013

Under rating threshold (show) For anyone that is interested in knowing the poem without having to replay the game, here it is. I hope and pray that I will find The child that I have left behind For as I hear the madness gloat A frightened scream rips from my throat A child's love, with blind ambition Against my panicked admonition Into the heart of evil's lair I battle on, without despair And search and wander as I might I see no ending to my plight There is no point in searching more For I'm the one he's searching for Thank you developer GROZZLER for the awesome game.

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Developer response from GroZZleR

Thank you for playing and sharing it.

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Eklipsed

Jan. 19, 2013

Under rating threshold (show) Absolutely FANTASTIC! Insanely clever and beautifully designed. The difficulty progression was perfect, it got harder at just the right rate to not create frustration but allow you to love and look forward to the next challenge. I didn't want it to end. Originality factor is through the roof. 11/10 I hope to see sequels

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Developer response from GroZZleR

Thanks. I'm glad you liked the pacing, I worked on that for quite a bit re-arranging the order of levels.

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khailcs

Feb. 24, 2013

Under rating threshold (show) A platformer in a jigsaw world. Simple yet unexpected; definitely beautiful.

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Developer response from GroZZleR

Thank you very much.

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shannanan

Jan. 26, 2013

Under rating threshold (show) Awesome game. Needs more levels and a recap of the initial poem.

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Developer response from GroZZleR

More levels would need a new mechanic to help keep it fresh. I'll definitely keep it in mind though. Thanks.

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link53092

Jan. 21, 2013

Under rating threshold (show) great game. its like a brand new take on a classic platformer, and was really enjoyable. also liked how it actually took some thinking to figure out 5/5

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Developer response from GroZZleR

Glad you enjoyed it. Thank you.

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heatkiller18

Jan. 20, 2013

Under rating threshold (show) awsome game but more levels u go one the harder but great job with game keep up good work

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Developer response from GroZZleR

Sorry it's a little short. Glad you enjoyed it anyways.

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pocketdare

Jan. 20, 2013

Under rating threshold (show) I can't help but imagine that if I were a more poetic soul and had paid attention to the sentiment rather than jumping around like a madman, I'd find this sad :(

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Developer response from GroZZleR

I didn't set out to make people sad, so maybe it's for the best? Thanks for playing.

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azdun

Jan. 20, 2013

Under rating threshold (show) not bad i mean its has a story

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Developer response from GroZZleR

Thanks.

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MistyNight

Jan. 20, 2013

Under rating threshold (show) For some weird reason this game doesn't load for me here on Kong, it works fine on the BigDino page though... Using Chrome.

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Developer response from GroZZleR

That's really weird. There's nothing different between the two versions. Sorry about that.

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Sain1982

Jan. 20, 2013

Under rating threshold (show) Lovely game, 5/5 for the challenge! could you please incorporate a tag that allows you to read the whole story once the storyline is finished?

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Developer response from GroZZleR

I've PM'd you the whole poem. Sorry about that.

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