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The decisions you make need to create different options for decisions in the future. For the most part, everybody goes through the same set of options. Everybody is mugged, everybody is randomly attacked by 6 youths, everybody is asked if they'd like some candy from the creepy old man. There should be some elements to the circumstances you end up in that are randomly generated, and there should be some elements that are decided by what you've done in the past. Also the years go by much too fast, I went from young adult to old age before I'd even knew what was happening. It needs to be easy to marry someone, I was an attractive, rich smart guy who dated a girl for 35 years. After that 35 years, she still wasn't ready to "go steady" yet (which I find king of funny because dating somebody for 35 years seems like a pretty good description of going steady).
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Don Dorito lived a good life with Mary(9 in personality and attractiveness, ayyyy) and his three kids. The only downside to it was that he was fugly. :C
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I died after getting stabbed by a mugger. A hobo stole my shoes.
Turns out I can still date and go steady in death. I went to the movies with my girlfriend a couple times after I had died.
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Apparently you can die from kicking a ball around with friends,trying for a lead part in a play,and getting a photo taken.:/
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Lol I was expecting to goof off with a stupid text adventure but instead I actually thought. It's one of those games where even though it's not a puzzle or anything, it's still intellectually interesting. I think it's severely under-rated. Nicely done 5/5.
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If you enjoyed this game, you'll love Alter Ego. Just google "Alter Ego Game", that's the inspiration of Memoir Text Adventure.