A God From The Machine

A God From The Machine

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A God From The Machine

Rating:
2.6
Dirilis: July 07, 2012
Terakhir diperbarui: July 07, 2012
Pengembang: masterlemons

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Deskripsi

Game singkat tentang pemberontakan dan narsisme. Pastikan untuk membaca teks di setiap level. Kredit tileset untuk Gemini dari Stencyl.

Cara Bermain

Tombol panah untuk bergerak, Z untuk melompat, Z di udara untuk double-jump, dan Z sambil menempel di dinding untuk wall-jump.

Komentar

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clasher235

Jul. 07, 2012

10
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In my opinion, the end sentence falls victim to show don't tell. I didn't feel as if there was a machine in the earlier levels, as there was no real activity occurring other than that of the player character. It begins with the start of the rebellion. This could possibly be remedied by giving the player some kind of opening sequence where he is actually part of the machine(though that might be kind of boring), or an epilogue sequence where the aftermath of the machine's destruction is shown. The game states that the player "destroyed the old for an imaginary new", but I, personally, did not see any old to destroy. To clarify, I did like the overall theme of the game, I just think that more atmosphere could serve to clarify it and drive the point home. In addition, I liked the art style quite a bit(pixel art FTW), and the platforms were much smoother and better done than those of most other stencyl platformer games(I can see that you took measures to go beyond the basic engine).

masterlemons
masterlemons Developer

Wow, that was nice to read, I'm thankful you went to the trouble to give such an in-depth review! Yeah, I agree on a lot of the parts regarding story and clarification, etc. I'm still learning to make these games and don't have a whole lot of time to work on them, but I'll think about what you said. Thanks!

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cxdsom

Jul. 23, 2012

4
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Despite your schizophrenic inclinations, I must admit I had a good - and, unfortunately, short - time playing this game of yours. Even though we easily catch it's simplicity, we also realize you had a enjoyed making it, and this makes all difference. Keep studying, practising, showing out your games and I'll be gladly back here, ready to play it. Gratz.

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Samoht_Gnir

Jul. 07, 2012

4
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Not bad little game. A bit short, but it does have some difficulty to it. The storyline was pretty good. Keep up the good work. :)

masterlemons
masterlemons Developer

Thanks!

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trident351

Mar. 20, 2013

0
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simple enough

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milolove

Jul. 07, 2012

0
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Itยดs to hard for me Q.Q xD