Idle Not
di kruganteef
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Idle Not
Tag per Idle Not
Descrizione
This is a little game that grew from a practice of using hitTest, attachMovie, and so on, to a game that, in my opinion, will not be blammed or granted the honour of T*rd of the Week. It’s about somebody who has been very lazy, and you have to stop him from being lazy and escape from the hands of the Devil, which are determined to seize those whose hands are idle! With eight simple but interesting levels, I’m sure you’ll be anxious to see the ending!
I beg your pardon, I was getting a bit carried away. This game isn’t the best game on NG, but I put a bit of work on it. If you give this game a low score, please give the Audio Portal music a fair vote too – it’s great! If you find a bug, please tell me through a private message or review. I will fix it as soon as possible. Your name will also appear in the game!
At the time of writing, five players have completed the game. Congratulations and thank you!
Come si gioca
Keyboard Skills
Commenti
Eternal_Serenity
Jan. 05, 2014
I can understand that this game isn't the best, but at least have the self respect to proofread your game before you send it out: there was a typo in the first wall of text.
Also, don't copy and paste the same description you used for NG. That's just disrespectful to Kongregate.
Alet
Jan. 05, 2014
(sorry for double posting, but I'm limited to 1000 chars / comment)
And don't forget that there are still people who are too lazy to read (oh the irony), so a short tutorial in the first level and a small introduction in each level where a new things would be very nice. You don't have do delete the text before each level (you just need to re-write it, as I have already said :p), just something like "I wonder what's the key for..." is enough.
And please, make a key for the "Try Again" button at least. It is annoying to die and place the hand on the mouse again for one click every 10 seconds.
The music quality is also not very good, but well, it is the least important thing to worry about, not only because you can turn it off.
As I have already said, it is not a bad game at all, but in my opinion there are some points you could improve. I think 3 stars are fair.
Alet
Jan. 05, 2014
This game isn't bad at all. But to be honest it is also not really a good one. I mean the idea is good, but the implementation is not great. I'm not talking about the graphics, I don't care about that point.
The first point is the story. I think you should have worked harder on it. "The devil haunts me, because I am lazy" is pretty boring. I mean this cannot be the only reason, it must have a bad affect on other people, when you are lazy. Make your story more interesting, so it makes it worth reading a relatively long text. That's just my opinion.
Second point, the player shouldn't be able to hide the grid, since you are hiding the objects at the beginning of each level. It would be much harder to estimate the position of the objects without the grid.