The Terrific Adventures of Straw&Berry

The Terrific Adventures of Straw&Berry

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The Terrific Adventures of Straw&Berry

評価:
2.5
リリース日: April 10, 2013
最終更新: April 21, 2013
開発者: do0ottz

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説明

“The Terrific Adventures of Straw&Berry” will lighten your day , by being cute and funny in the same time .

遊び方

use : A to move left
D to move right
W to jump.
Press ‘Escape’ for the in-game menu .

開発者アップデート

Apr 21, 2013 7:37am

Added sound , added a menu [accessible by pressing Escape] , fixed the double sprite problem when jumping .

コメント

0/1000
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darkedge3000

Apr. 21, 2013

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Yeah, I still stick with my 1/5, there are still a huge amount of issues, but I can see good progress in improving it.

My suggestion is to sort out the infinite jump trick next. A simple engine for this could be a jump variable set to 1, or 2 for double jump. When you jump, check if the variable is greater than 0, if so, jump and reduce variable by 1. Finally, reset the variable to 1 or 2 when you touch the ground.

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rut_1

Apr. 11, 2013

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OMG laughed so hard. Shoulda been called Adventures of Papy and Rus for the font. I think Berry has a tack in her shoe - she jumps so fast!

do0ottz
do0ottz 開発者

Glad you enjoyed it :)

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darkedge3000

Apr. 10, 2013

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Finally gameplay, oh boy, this is the thing you need to work on the most by far. First of all, you can walk off the screen. I suggest, with a better background, adding a wall of sorts. Secondly, jumping is completly broken. When you jump, you warp upwards, and moving left/right results in a graphical glitch which duplicates you. Also, there is no limit to the amount of jumps you can have, keep it to double jump at most.
Hitboxes also need work, it looks like I am in the wall at times, and it ruins presentation a lot.
Finally, your physics engine needs work, things were slippy on edges, and jumping on collectable had some resistance.

Lots of problems, sorry to be harsh on your first game here, but I have to tell it as it is, it needs major re-thinking.

1/5

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darkedge3000

Apr. 10, 2013

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Right... This game is a over simplistic bug-fest. Bear with me, this will be a very long review for a Kongregate game.

First of all, the story is very slow, the pause is too long between slides, and the editting was VERY poor, random coloured backgrounds which didn't fit the area.

Speaking of graphics, they are very poor indeed. The background is ugly and stretched, and the block tyles are placed poorly with the same ugly sprite. The characters are the only decent sprites, fitting the cartoon-notebook style I assume you went for, but it needs animation.

There is no music, and little to no sound. Please, get music AND sound, it enhances the exprience so much more.

Continues in another post

do0ottz
do0ottz 開発者

Try it now .. I fixed some of the problems .. not all of them .. but some .. and i added sound .. Let me know what you think now :)