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Topic: Off-topic / Rate the song above you. V.2

Alright, I could understand if you didn’t like it, but… not only did you not finish the song (I know this because I had started the song in another tab before posting it and it didn’t even finish when you replied), but you labeled it wrong. It’s not jungle music at all, despite the name of the band and song. I guess I could see how one could get the impression WHEN THEY DON’T EVEN BOTHER TO LISTEN TO THE SONG.

Anyways, I give your song a 2/10 – The video is entertaining, but I’m rating the song, which is shit.

Aphex Twin – Avril 14th

Topic: Off-topic / Rate the song above you. V.2

8.5/10 – Shit is tight, not much more to say.

Animal Collective – Lion in a Coma

Topic: Off-topic / Rate the song above you. V.2

I could attempt to sound better than all the dadrockers out there who were “born in the wrong generation” by slamming this song and its repetitive nature, bland instrumentation, and hollow lyrics, but I won’t because it’s a fucking great song and it’s too fun for me to pretend otherwise. 9/10.

Neutral Milk Hotel – Two-Headed Boy

Topic: Off-topic / What other forums do you post on?

/mu/, /tv/, a few subreddits. That’s about it.

Topic: Off-topic / Rate the song above you. V.2

Originally posted by thedude0:

Originally posted by PlainBlandMan:

Originally posted by thedude0:

4/10 not what i expected from the start
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dZJPYo-YUkA

1/10

Let me know when you grow out of metal.

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Death Grips – Guillotine

never. the end.

1/10 rap is rubbish
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vJ3emd3phLY you cannot kill the metal

You’re an idiot. Get noided, fagfuck.

@Indy – 2.5/10 – Very bad, I was clearly born in the RIGHT generation.

Death Grips – I Want It I Need It

EDIT: @AZ – 9/10. Not sure how to describe why I liked that song so much, but it’s fucking great.

Topic: Off-topic / My first creepy pasta

Your creepypasta only appeals to a very specific audience, for one. But more than that, you get to the “tense and spooky” moments way too early. The audience doesn’t have time to see the character feel relaxed and safe. You should linger on that because most of the tension comes from the audience knowing the character is in danger while the character doesn’t.

The actual tense moments are kind of lame unless you play the games, which I imagine wouldn’t really improve the story that much. “The name was odd”. Really? A name like KillerX doesn’t seem that odd at all outside of Club Penguin, unless it’s something specific to the game that I’m unaware of. Then your character gets all butthurt about what most players would attribute to a stupid glitch or mod (since we’ve already established it’s a modded server).

Your character then is utterly baffled by glitches, and this makes up a huge paragraph. Glitches aren’t scary. There is no sense of danger. This is a virtual game. Fuck, I was waiting for spookyskeleton.gif to pop up and play a loud spooky laugh through your speakers. The dialogue… I don’t even. It’s ridiculous. There’s no sense of panic or fear, and when we’re wondering what the hell we’ve been reading, suddenly everything cuts to black. 2SPOOKY!!!!

And then you hear a scurrying noise in the laundry room. Jesus Christ, this line could have been okay. But the words ‘laundry room’ do not provoke any sort of fear response. Someone breathing on your neck is spooky. A movement of shadows in a reflection is spooky. An eerie draft of wind is spooky. But not a goddamn mouse shuffling through your drier sheets.

TL;DR – Make your stories about topics everyone can relate to. Also focus on things that make us tense. Make better open endings if they must be open endings.

I hope I’m not coming across as rude. You need criticism to grow and I hope the areas where I’m harsh emphasize which parts need the most improvement. By all means, keep writing and trying to improve.

Topic: Off-topic / My first creepy pasta

oh god please no

Topic: Off-topic / How much is a Kred in Phil. peso?

A Phillipine peso is the equivalent of $0.02 USD. Ignoring the ‘bonus Kred’ promotions offered for the more expensive Kred packages, each Kred is sold for $0.10 USD. So 1 Kred = 5 Phillipine pesos, assuming you don’t factor in the bonus Kreds. Even if you did, it wouldn’t even be a difference of 1 peso per Kred.

Topic: Off-topic / Rate the song above you. V.2

8/10 – Felt a little underwhelming the whole time, but it has a strong melody and solid lyrics.

Out of Egypt, Into the Great Laugh of Mankind, and I Shake the Dirt from My Sandals as I Run – Sufjan Stevens

Topic: Off-topic / Who's your favorite Comedian?

Originally posted by cesarcurado:

Originally posted by Peccancy:

It means I know this history of this place, considering I’d put it all into a massive thread.
Plus, I’ve been here since 2009 and had starting posting in 2010.
Learn who I am before insultin’ me, mate.

“MEMBER SINCE Mar. 03, 2013”

seems legit

what are alt accounts

someone please explain this concept to me i’m so fucking retarded

how do i eat

Topic: Off-topic / Who's your favorite Comedian?

Someone’s occupation isn’t up for debate. Your idea of what someone is in terms of their occupation cannot be a subjective opinion. It’s right or wrong. In your case, wrong.

Topic: Off-topic / My Mom Is Gonna Die

first i was like: wow wtf what a whore, using anti-baby pills for 2 fucking years

oh god my sides

Topic: Off-topic / OT's Official Tinychat Thread (OOTT)

fuk u taylor

Topic: Off-topic / OT's Official Tinychat Thread (OOTT)

http://tinychat.com/difondiofndsfonis

>please respond

Topic: Off-topic / Tell me what you think of my drawing.

Originally posted by prettywolfgirl:

I use different names so people won’t find out who I am.

That’s what I initially thought, alternate accounts. But each account has a fair amount of activity, more than one person could reasonably maintain. The art styles between the two accounts are pretty different and the signatures differ a lot too.

Topic: Off-topic / Tell me what you think of my drawing.

Your original drawing was posted by edfersure back in 2011. That doesn’t necessarily prove you didn’t draw this, but it’s weird you’d wait to share an old drawing with us instead of, say, a more recent drawing. Why not show off newer drawings as you improve your artistic abilities? Suspicious, but whatever.

However, your second drawing piques my interest since it was posted by wolf-by-the-moon back in 2009. Not only do the owners of these two accounts claim to be from entirely different countries, but the art styles are ridiculously different. I wanted to chalk it up to a developing art style, but considering the signatures on the two drawings are completely different, I think it’s more likely you’re posting the work of others as your own.

The signatures, for comparison:

If you just posted two drawings by the same artist I wouldn’t have been suspicious, but you actually posted DIRECT LINKS to the deviantART pages of entirely different artists. I’d really like to see you explain this.

Topic: Off-topic / The fact that so many books still name the Beatles "the greatest or most significant or most influential" rock band ever only tells you how far rock music still is from becoming a serious art.

DAMMIT PIERO

TROUT MASK REPLICA FUCKING SUCKS

Topic: Off-topic / OT's Official Tinychat Thread (OOTT)

http://tinychat.com/difondiofndsfonis

Come and play music and shit. It’ll be fun.

Topic: Off-topic / Ever tried Borderlands Two?

SHOOT ME IN THE FAAAAAACE

Topic: Off-topic / We missed the most significant thing.

I LOVE YOU JESUS CHRIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIST

Topic: Off-topic / Rate the song above you. V.2

2/10 – What started out as a mildly enjoyable though empty tune turned to equally empty ersatz shit before resuming its tune which by then seemed catchy only for the sake of being catchy. Manufactured poprock at its finest.

The Velvet Underground and Nico – All Tomorrow’s Parties

Topic: Serious Discussion / On the ethics of "spooking"...

Topic: Off-topic / Best Movie Ever...

Magnolia.

Topic: Off-topic / Enjoy.

welcome back, baby

Topic: Off-topic / Rate the song above you. V.2

@MlleBunneh: 4/10 – I’m not really into metal for the most part, so maybe I’m a bit biased for not loving this. The vocals are kind of annoying and don’t work particularly well with everything else, which is also nothing special. I guess I can see the appeal, but this particular kind of pop-metal isn’t my style.

@HappyAlcoholic: 6/10 – Kind of the same reasons as above, but there’s a bit less of a ‘pop’ feel to it and the vocals are better. So it’s okay, I guess.

Ariel Pink’s Haunted Graffiti – Round and Round