Recent posts by Khnum666 on Kongregate

Topic: The Arts / Get a Santa hat on your avatar request thread.

Originally posted by CityTech:

Me?

Going to sleep and will be building a computer tomorrow so it might take a while to get to you/any others.

Topic: The Arts / Get a Santa hat on your avatar request thread.

Originally posted by ST3ALTH15:

Me please.

Sorry, it’s not very good. :( The colours made it awkward.

Topic: The Arts / {Ink Elegance} [Group]

Then write without it. :)

A poem doesn’t need any rhyme to be good, if you’re not too good at rhyming focus on other poetic thingies techniques.

I’m afraid I can’t offer any criticism as I’m dreadful at poetry.

Topic: The Arts / Get a Santa hat on your avatar request thread.

Originally posted by Glomple:

Could I get mine done? :)

Of course. :D

Topic: The Arts / Get a Santa hat on your avatar request thread.

Originally posted by Thepenguinking2:

me please?

Originally posted by Megaritish1:

Originally posted by Khnum666:

Done! :)

Thanks! ^_

No problem.

Topic: The Arts / Get a Santa hat on your avatar request thread.

Done! :)

Topic: The Arts / (story i am making for short story writing class) The Many Gods: Thumos's Rule

I like it. You could flesh out the descriptions a bit more, one vague statement about the queen’s clothing seems lazy to me. Please post more as I’m interested in the present tense narrative as it’s something I can never pull off correctly. A few minor gripes(that may or may not make sense to anyone who doesn’t have my strange brain);

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Thumos circles his way to the hole in the castle he had made 7 months ago.

Your word ordering isn’t wrong but sounds better in my opinion like this:

Thumos circles his way to the hole he had made in the castle 7 months ago.

I don’t know why and feel free to disagree but I feel that it allows the reader to start judging the character of Thumos easier if we realise that he has caused the hole earlier in the sentence. Also as an FYI, I tend to write whatever comes into my head straight away(online and on paper) and sometimes(most times) it doesn’t make much sense. So don’t go all crazy on me if I make a stupid suggestion/criticism please.

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looks into the throne(room?)

into the throne seems a bit odd. Maybe you meant throne room? Not to be a backseat writer or insulting but I would have wrote something like this,

As Thumos lands, his talons gripping tightly around the jagged edge of the broken stone wall, he looks towards the throne, and at the queen, standing still in the center of the exposed room.

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anything he throws at her

Maybe future tense would fit better here?

Anyway nice start, I enjoy present tense writing so please post more. :D

Topic: The Arts / Help wanted!

^…?

I’m no expert or even amateur but I have dabbled in the past. The only tips I could give you would be to blend the text better with the BG/FG. The text in the first one is very distracting from the main image especially with the lens flare. You are attracted straight towards the bright lens flare and ignore the rest, also the text is awfully jagged and low quality. I know it’s when from when you started but the more you hear the same things the more likely you are to remember when critiquing your own work.

The second one actually looks pretty good to me. I would have probably put it in line more with her right arm so it doesn’t stop the “flow” or whatever of the image. Tilted slightly, y’know. Then try to blend it more so it doesn’t stand out above Samus. You’ve come a long way though from that first one. :)

Again, newbie tips here but I felt like contributing.

Topic: The Arts / Get a Santa hat on your avatar request thread.

Bump for great justice! It may be a tad early but I’ll be damned if I’m looking for this thread again.

Topic: Off-topic / Favorite part about TF2

Originally posted by Cammy_Justice:

The way it wont run on my comp.

Topic: The Arts / Pokemon Fusion! Rawr! 3

Originally posted by HolyQuacamole:

I seriously can’t see how you guys are so serious about this.

It’s a hobby. People tend to try and be decent at their hobbies. What harm could helping them get better do?

Topic: The Arts / [Group] Shattered

Oooh magical thread I completely forgot about. What page should I read up from? I’m interested in helping again, just been trying to improve my horrible laptop(by “borrowing” two sticks of 1GB DDR2 RAM from my sister’s laptop) and playing a lot of Magic: the Gathering, ironically.

It’s nice to see we seem to have a sturdier base game this time around.

Also I glanced over the Encyclopedia on the site and found a tiny error,

The basic goal of every battle is t smash your opponent

Topic: The Arts / [Group] Prophets of Pixels

Originally posted by HolyQuacamole:

Pretty fucking awesome.

on that Mario World collab. We could totally do something like that and now that I’ve recovered from a full wipe of my hard drives I can do some art! :) But not today, I just stayed up all night watching a CoD live streamed tournament. Time to sleep.

Topic: General Gaming / Mw3, Battlefield 3 or skyrim?

Skyrim.
I love RPGs.

Topic: General Gaming / Planning on buying MW3?

Not planning on it but I’m sure I can get it for a decent price second hand after the first week. I’ll probably rent it for a while to see if I like it. If not, I still have CoD2-7 to play, also Skyrim and AC:R will be released in the same month so I’m not sure which game I’ll get.

As for my opinions on the game. I saw the E3 gameplay and it looks like MW2 which I like. I really enjoyed that game.

Topic: The Arts / [Group] Prophets of Pixels

It looks great. I’m assuming the style was inspired from Terraria? Still awesome though.

Topic: The Arts / Kisame's Sig/banner/avatar thread (Take 2)

I agree. I love your sigs Nordor, especially taking into account how much you have improved as opposed to me who hasn’t.

Topic: The Arts / [Group] Prophets of Pixels

Originally posted by alexolsenpang:

Originally posted by Khnum666:

Anyway, can I have 21-24 and 45-47. I hope that sort of perspective won’t look weird beside everything else.

sorry I have 44 – 50

Whoops. Didn’t see that.

Topic: The Arts / [Group] Prophets of Pixels

Anyway, can I have 21-24 and 45-47. I hope that sort of perspective won’t look weird beside everything else.

Topic: The Arts / [Group] Prophets of Pixels

Well they are going to be drawn over anyway. :P

Topic: The Arts / Require help finding a song! It's killing me.

I agree. I think it’s Winner by Swingfly >.>

Topic: The Arts / Dark Place

I’m not sure what it is, but I’m enjoying it nonetheless. :)
I do love your random artwork, it’s like finding a shiny pokemon, it appears every once and a while and you stare in awe for some time.

Topic: The Arts / my web site

I don’t like the website layout. The music was low quality, or that may be my speakers. Either way it was very annoying and made me leave the page a lot quicker than I would have. The pictures were also of a low quality and don’t look that hard to recreate. Some of them looked decent and I think I saw some nice clay stuff but they were far too small to judge.

And I’ll save you the trouble of googling me for some incriminating picture that disqualifies me from offering my opinion on something artistic.

A terrible image by Khnum666, the outlining is terrible and he colours outside of the lines. http://khnum666.deviantart.com/art/Bulbasaur-Fan-Art-149902468 Learn to digi-paint and not draw like a 5 year old.

Topic: The Arts / [Group] Prophets of Pixels

Managed to get on a computer, mines out of commission for a while.

My vote for Lobstershow.

Keep up the awesome work everyone. :)

Topic: The Arts / [Group] Prophets of Pixels

But it said no and still says no. :S

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