yuyuter
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Topic: The Arts /
YUYUTER
Breah. What’s done is done. Too lazy to go back.
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yuyuter
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YUYUTER

C4d spammage…
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yuyuter
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YUYUTER
In a nutshell.
I’ll keep it in mind though.
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yuyuter
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yuyuter
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YUYUTER
Hey. So, whenever I make something (which is like once a month now) it’ll be here.
Or you can follow me on deviantArt. Just sayin’.
http://yuyuter.deviantart.com/
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yuyuter
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Topic: The Arts /
Dragon 1 - A Making Of
a) remove wings
b) make it thinner
c) shorten neck?
d) I like the feet, still don’t know what kind of hand to do, although these little curly things looks better than the other things I tried.
e) it’ll be up tomorrow or the day after.
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yuyuter
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Dragon 1 - A Making Of

Refined the sketch. What now?
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yuyuter
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Topic: The Arts /
Dragon 1 - A Making Of
Hey there. This is where I’ll be posting the various stages of one of my character designs. Here’s DAY 1: The Sketch.

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yuyuter
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yuyuter
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Art Groups
I see.
Imma start a gallery thread.
:D
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yuyuter
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Topic: The Arts /
Art Groups
Beh.
So for a really long time, visual art community at Kongregate has been organized with huge groups, like Reaper Graphix way back, Canopy Art a bit back, and Dragon Art all the way through.
So I was thinking.
This seems to limit the attention given to our art, albeit more specialized attention, from fellow artists.
Wouldn’t it be better if we do what virtually all other forums do, and post gallery threads, or threads for individual pieces?
I’ll keep this short, so you can read it :p
Gimme some feedback.
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yuyuter
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Topic: The Arts /
[group] DRAGON ART - All Are Welcome!

Meh. Not very happy with the lighting, but I tried.
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yuyuter
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[group] DRAGON ART - All Are Welcome!
FINAL VERSION:

No more. Just no.
:p Yeah I’m done, but some final cnc might be helpful for my progression in the future.
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yuyuter
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Topic: The Arts /
[group] DRAGON ART - All Are Welcome!
Lol JELLYFISH!
Yeah I agree with Wolfears, first one looks like a you trollin’ us.
Second, a lot better without text. Great render, good C4D’s, but the render does not blend in at all. Just looks like you made a background, pasted a C4D, pasted a stock, and added more C4D’s.
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yuyuter
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[group] DRAGON ART - All Are Welcome!

Did what pirate recommended. Now what? :D
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yuyuter
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[group] DRAGON ART - All Are Welcome!
Haha better, I like the second one better.
Thanks for the cc. I might just destaurate the Ichigo one.
Edit:

How’s that?
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yuyuter
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Topic: The Arts /
[group]canopyart – artist community


Some attempts on color splash. Yeeeaah. They’re both eh.
edit:

bw version
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yuyuter
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Topic: The Arts /
[group] DRAGON ART - All Are Welcome!


Two more. For both, got halfway through, ran outta inspiration, finished off as best I could. Not the best renders either.
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yuyuter
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Topic: The Arts /
[group]canopyart – artist community
waithxyou :D
be making more soon.
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yuyuter
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Topic: The Arts /
[group] DRAGON ART - All Are Welcome!
Originally posted by piratemonkey:
Originally posted by yuyuter:
New sig! And I’m back >:D
http://yuyuter.deviantart.com/art/Vegeta-Signature-246190317
Please gimme some critic…ing-ish whatever it’s called.
Things I need to learn
-fractal use
-C4D use
-colouring
-sketching
-blablabla T^T I FEEL SO NEWB
I don’t really like this tag… at all.
|I know you’ll probably be able to handle the C&C so yeeh.
The lighting is way to strong, and looks really fake – soft brushing never really looks great for lighting from what I’ve seen. It covers the focal and makes the tag look really empty; I’d remove it, and start dodging/burning instead.
The text is way to large, and steals the focal, which again might be because of the lighting, but it is too big anyway – although has really cool shapes with it.
The focal needs sharpening.
The effects are good, and the flow is nice, apart from the text, which throws the piece well off balance.
The background is boring, and there is too much negative space, try getting a few soft effects, like a space stock on the background?
The borders over-kill it.
I think you should try move your style back to stuff like this – that tag is insane :D
Thanks Pirate :D But the tag you liked, a lot of people denounced as “C4D Spammage”. Blasphemy.
Sexy piece, this is more like it :D
Good focal, nice effects, all that jazz.
Try strengthening the lighting near the lightsource to make the focal a bit stronger, and also the piece more interesting and less flat. A few shadows could be stronger too. (In other words, more contrast throughout)
I really don’t like the black blur on the left side. Crop it or, or better, just remove the black.
Unsure if I like the text. It is a bit distracting, so I’d remove it.
Thanks :D
The effects on this are really weak, and don’t really compliment your stock. The overall piece looks really messy. I don’t really like this one either, not a great illustration of your best work IMHO.
Yeah I know I whipped it up an hour before the deadline >:O

The back arm is pissing me off, but I hated the effects I had other it even more.
Effects and coloring are real nice there, as the lighting (which I’ve never figured out how you do it), but as stated before, the top right is weak. The effects there like the cutting off and splicing pixels together looks really bad.
If you hate the arm, do what I do. Smudge it to hell, cover it with C4D spam, or just erase it ;D
Pirate, yuyuter, ozzy, moonmanmat! You are still all around!
So are you, I hope :p
We’ve got a wee little Renaissance here, don’t we?
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yuyuter
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