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Topic: Off-topic / Battle of Gods

Originally posted by Fronebular

Yeah, you tell them, Fronebular.

Stop with the quote pyramid

Topic: Off-topic / Battle of Gods

Topic: Off-topic / Battle of Gods

Chapter 7: The Secret Installations
Hi!, Im sorry for not writing earlier its just I wasnt inspired, so to make up for this, I made a long chapter for you to read lol

I was now in front of the secret installations this organizations had. We run.in. While we were running to stop this organization from continuing it’s tirany era. We got in, but at the top of the door was a hatchet, and there was a keypad hidden. Unfortunately, we didn’t know. Chicogato went first, the hatchet fell rapidly to the floor.He was headless and bleeding a lot. Now it was me and FrozenCookie. We noticed the keypad and deactivated it. Next was a hall with a lot of bifurcations, probably filled with traps. Frozen went to the left, and I to the right.
At the end of the right path was a soul-draining creature. This spooky creature had white fur with red sparkled all around it. It had big terrifying eyes. I froze in the spot. His eyes were like seeing your worst nightmare become true. He leaned foward to attack me, but fortunately FrozenCookie arrived and threw a kunai in the middle of the forehead of the creature. The creature fell to the floor. Frozen turned round and started walking towards the main hall when the creature jumped above me, caught frozen with his sharp claws, and started biting him with his enormous and blood-thirsty teeth. Frozen I shouted at the top of my lungs.
I ran past the creature and tried to escape his face, that was probably telling me “you’re next!”. The creature flew and without realizing It was over my head. He fell straight into me, but I kicked him and made him lean backwards. I turned round and went to the hall where the paths were. I found a legend that said “not everyone can grab this items. Only people with pure heart and no evil inside them. This are tools made specially to kill the beast. I took it.A shield and a sword. I started fighting the devilish creature. After several minutes the creature hold me, and cut off my arm(the one where the shield was).
When he was about to destroy my second arm., I stabbed him in the heart, and he stood up, and starting walking backwards with clumsy movements. He then died. My arm was bleeding, at the point I almost faint.Luckily I remembered that in Frozen’s backpack there were some medical items in case we needed them. I struggled to the place where he was lying and fainted, although, to me , it seemed like I was dead.
I was woken up by a strange voice, encased in a pitch black suit. I was tied up with belts in a laboratory table with the strange guy who woke me up looking at me. I had a confusing idea of where I was at the time, and couldn’t have recognized the one who woke me up was michaelan.
I freed from the laboratory table because Michaelan and the scientific started arguing about Mich not had made sure I had a long sleep-well time before I woke up, so I could be examined. I ran with my bandadged arm still hurting. Quickly I reached the main research room and started passing the information to the DataTraveller i had on my pocket.
I ran towards the exit, when a figure appeared quickly “ Oh, where do you think you are going friend?. You cannot escape, not with our information on that DataTraveller of yours ” she said. I stumbled to punch her but she dodged it without batting an eye. On my condition there wasn’t much I could do. I did all kind of movements I knew to punch her but she dodged them all without even moving a feet from the ground.
Suddenly a lot of guards appeared behind my back, and started shooting at me. I fell to the floor.
At that moment I thought I was dead, but before closing my last eye, I saw twilight sparkle throw a smoke bomb and take me out of there. He said he found a way to make me be inmortal for 5 minutes, however only worked on each person once, because the first time it uses, it alters your DNA so that anytime you want to drink it again, it’ll have no effect.
He took me to the helicopter he had brought, and we flew back to the base, to remake the plan of fighting him. We examined the information and realized they made genetic experiments with animals so what I’ve seen was a rabbit altered to look like a ferocious creature, and to act like one.
We found the weakness of it, but to find out more about its attacks, the next step was recovering FrozenCookie’s body, and why not, while we were at it, Chicogato’s to analize the possible traps there might be in there.

Topic: Forum Games / Battle of Gods

Topic: Tyrant / Faction Recruitment Thread

Z-Warriors lvl 2 almost 3 faction with active members and wars. 0 tiles. People with good decks OR lvl 17 and above. you will enjoy being here, we make jokes, we are all friends. No fightings. If you are interested Pm @miles000, Guitarbattle, Master760, xdcruz, or me, uruguay. Regards to everyone

Topic: Off-topic / Battle of Gods

Its not like im going to release a chapter each day but I wanted to write. So heres chapter 6 :D

Chapter 6: ¡Demons from the past!

Four years have passed since that fight between me and Michaelan,and we still havent revived the citizens. But on those four years…In the 2nd year something happened. I remember black skies, the lightning all around me. I remember each flash, as time began to blur. Like a startling sign, the fate had finally found me. And her voice was all I heard, while I get what I deserve.
While I was walking home, an angelical figure stood up in front of me. “ You again? ” I asked. “ Yes, I’ve got a petition from the god from the skies Horakthy ” he said. “ He told me to tell you that you should not trust michaelan ” he said. “ So give me reason, to prove me wrong. Connect the space between us ” I shouted. My voice’s echo broke all the windows of a 10th floor apartment. “ First, he was once on the evil side, and you dont know if hes an informant and telling his evil minions the change to attack. I say you take him out from the map. Its a petition from Horakthy ” he said, while turning round and starting to fly upwards to leave. “ Well then, Ill will not be on the devils side, but neither on your side. I will be on my own now. I wont kill michaelan and if your organization that calls themself “ Angels of Despair ” dares to stand in my way. I wont doubt to raise guns against the people who once were my allies, as I’ve learnt that in life you have to make sacrifices ” I said.
When I reached home, I saw everyone sleeping, and so I did the same as them. I knew I would probably have to fight Horakthy in the only place he would dare to reveal himself “ Dreamland ”. Inmediately after I arrived, an army of thousand men was standing in front of me. They left a space in the middle to let someone pass. I saw a Shadowy Figure walking towards me. I had no doubt at all, it was him. I prepared to strike, and when I did so, I realized it was not him but an illusion of michaelan, that he created. “ Good, youre learning ” said a strong voice. “ Show up you coward, lets finish this here and now ” I said. “ Im afraid I cant do that. I wont get down to get my hands dirty with garbage. We all know my power is far more superior than yours ” he said. “ Well then show up and Ill show you im not a kid anymore ” I said with pride. “ I hate to get my hands dirty with garbage, but I dont have any choice ” he said.
I could see him clearly now. White beard with a black tunique and a logo that said “Angels of Despair” but also “ Hellsinger ”. “ Was he responsable for sending michaelan to attack me? ” I needed answers. The fight started, one, two, three, I count his men as they were falling on to my feet. I finally was face to face, hand to hand, head to head, with him. I freed all my power to defeat him, but inmediately he appeared on my back. I froze on the spot. He started punching me and left me badly injured. I decided to make my RasenKatori, and I did. However, it hit, but he threw it back with one finger. “ We will meet again in real life, and not in a dream like this, when you become strong enough as to face me. I told you garbage will always be garbage”
Garbage will always be garbage… Now I remember that frase and makes me smile. How innocent and stupid had I been on that moment, but now, my only objective in life was defeating him. Revenge was everything for me. I decided to make a plan to strike.

Topic: Off-topic / Battle of Gods

Originally posted by wesley_ding:

Rating: 0/10
1. Grmr n splling mostakes applety
2. http://www.kongregate.com/forums/64-everybody-edits/topics/336381-story-and-question

Actually, pretty good.

Thank you. But to the owner of that answer I’d like to know my mistakes to know where to correct them.

Topic: Off-topic / Battle of Gods

Originally posted by GottaAskTheMan:

Was going to say this fits in another sub-forum, like FGF or TAF, but OT is fine too! :D

Nice story!

Thank you, I appreciate your opinion

Topic: Everybody Edits / STORY and QUESTION

I’d like everyone of you who visit the post to kindly read my story http://www.kongregate.com/forums/2-off-topic/topics/333828-battle-of-gods?page=1#posts-7002020. Oh and BTW how’s the energy system? one day I had 250 energy on the other 300….

Topic: Off-topic / Battle of Gods

Chapter 5: ¡¿The seal breaks?!

Meanwhile in Earth:
The city was devastated, half the city was turned to ashes. _“A beast is attacking the city” _ the news warned. “We believe it’s the creature that attacked the Royal Castle 16 years ago”. _“It’s a very critical situation and we’ve asked for help to the world already” _. In a very secret lab of the city, was a Scientist and a very abled fighter called Twilight Sparkle. He found a way to break the laws of science and open a portal from both Heaven and Hell to earth. However this was assuming the risk that not even the person you were looking for would come back but all the evil people who once made damage to the city would have a chance to do it again
To make this portal open, both parts have to colaborate, so, to make a portal from hell to Earth, they should do the portal at the same time from both sides to break the barrier. Finally I came back to earth. I saw in the news the attack of the Beast and decided to take care of him. I did re-seal the beast in my body but at the same time I heard a voice “Now the real battle BEGINS” said a strong voice.“That voice…Could it be? Could they be alive? No way, Im sure they were sealed correctly” I thought. But I thought wrong. All hells army was there to defeat me, but the city villagers were with me. And so with the shout of “GO” from both sides, the fight started.
A lot of blood was sparkled around us, weapons flew past our ears, our partners dead on the floor… War was not a thing you could tolerate that easily. Both parts were fighting at all power to win the war, because that would implicate the total dominance of one part among the other, and would determine the destiny of the city. While my friends and neighbours were fighting, I came head to head with the king of the evil army “Michaelan” . Punches flew, Punches went from one side to another.
It was a very tied match. If I managed to punch him, he punched me at the same time. I started throwing weapons at him, throwing punches and kicks, but it was useless. After hours of fighting, Michaelan and I were the only one left in feet, both parts had been severely affected by the war. Our battle would define the destiny of the village,no, of the WORLD!. Finally I thought of a plan. I would let him come for me. One second before, I would dodge the attack and stand behind him. Just then I would knock him and tie him up to extract him some information. Maybe later I’d kill him. But the plan didn’t go well. He knew what I was planning and made the attack.
However, when I was jumping, he grabbed my feet and threw me on the ground. He had me against the ropes. He grabbed a katana, in order to kill me. Just then I stopped it with my fingers with my strenght and started making my Rachiri Katori. He flew away hurt, but not dead. I tied him up with a rope I found lying on the street and went to look for some Medicine. I thought no one on the city was left alive, until I found the scientist Twilight Sparkle that had been fighting on the war, hurt and with a broken leg. To my sight, he looked like a pony. I gave him some medicine, and he told me there was a way of remaking the city and reviving the people. He told me what had happened when I was dead, and told me that If I managed to get the power from all of them, I’d be unstoppable. But…would I be really unstoppable?

Find what will happen next in the next chapter of BATTLE OF GODS!!!!

Updates:
Added Michaelan
Added Bjjdude(Twilight Sparkle)

Topic: Everybody Edits / IMPORTANT!!!

Originally posted by GottaAskTheMan:

Nobody checks the off-topic forums?

Excuseeeeee me, but about 10x more people check that than this.

Yes, you’re in somepart right, but they’re so unsociable, I mean they just limit to read it, boring people.

Topic: Everybody Edits / IMPORTANT!!!

Topic: Off-topic / Battle of Gods

Originally posted by Lonewolf1621:

X3 Hey uruguay.

Yeah?

Topic: Off-topic / Battle of Gods

Sorry to keep you waiting. Exams don’t give me much of a choice, though.. HOWEVER the new chapter is here

Chapter 5: Not Enough(Part 1)
Four years have passed since the giants problem. I had trained my power, in a way that now I can asimilate and control how much I use. A new mayor had been elected, and there was a day out in order to remember the death of the last mayor. The habitants lived happily,run,played, everything normal people would do.
However, there was a TV-Call which textually said “Beware, hero. Beware. I have released a plague that infected a lot of countrys and will infect yours too, and to win this fight, you’ll need to kill your own people, but…the question is… Will you be able to do so?. In 5 minutes all the population of the country will become zombies. And then when they’re all zombies. ¡I’LL REDUCE THEM TO ASHES!” he said with high accent. “Problems never run out for me…God darn it” I said.
People were running in the street, hidden on their houses, or with weapons. It was like a Free-for-all Civil War. I quickly went to the hall and asked the mayor about a possible solution. He told me he had none. I decided to investigate a bit myself. I had 3 friends from school that I knew would help me on the trip. They were Miles000,Guitarbattle and Lecr20. After I looked for them, we headed towards the mountain to gather “Ichiranmi” a very rare flower found in high places.
As we were heading for the mountains, I heard a strange noise. Zombies dropped upon us, and we were bitten. Fortunately, I was more resistent to these kind of infections, and I could support it, but my other friends were infected. I found 5 “Ichiranmi” flowers and went to my house. I opened the door that led to my underground lab, made an eye-scan, put the password, and I finally reached there.
While I was finding a cure, I started to feel a pain in the neck. That infection! It was spreading through me, killing my cells and replacing them with new ones. On my last will, before killing other human beings, I sent a bird with a message “On the coastside you will find, a very interesting lab, something that hides, investigate it, and don’t leave it back, since you will need it, to defeat him for once” The bird arrived to an underground survivor refuge. They went inmediately to the site. I was guarding it, but I couldn’t control my actions. I started a fight with them, One, two, three, they all seemed to fall straight into what he planned. Finally a woman came from the back with a Stakeout(Shotgun) and made me four holes.I was killed.

Part 2:
I reached a place which I thought was the heaven but ooh no. I was very very wrong.. It was the hell. I saw the devil lying backwards, with blood on his chest. “Stupid mortals, you can’t kill me, it’s my place, I have total control here”. I see…they wanted to be independent of the devil’s orders so they formed an army to defeat him. I don’t know why they did it, if they knew it was impossible to kill him. But the courage of the people, made me brave as to say “DEVIL. LET’S SOLVE THIS. HERE AND NOW WITH A COMBAT TO DEATH! ”. “Oh another mortal that wants to defend the souls of the dead?” he said. “Hmph, Don’t think it’ll be easy, though I have my tricks also” I said. I had learnt some interesting skills on those four years.
I started fighting, the demon overpowered me in Speed and Strength…and in Life because he was inmortal. He quickly appeared on my back and when he was about to stab me, I jumped, ran over his sword and kicked him in the face.. I then rushed to its place and started punching him one after another punch. “Oh you’re good mortal, but I’ll think this fight must end here” .
He started creating his technique, called Chidori, or Devil’s Wrath. When he finished creating his technique, he went for me and I did the same. Both our techniques clashed. His Chidori VS my Rachiri Katori. I knew to beat him I had to use my hidden power. I released all my hidden power and he said. “Oh you’re not the only one who can do that” . Suddenly the clash had become 10 times bigger than before.
After several minutes, the rebels(people who were against the devil) started attacking him from before. I took this oportunity and put all my power to defeat him. I had won the clash, but he was inmortal. “Haha I can’t die,fool” he said, and I replied “Keep talking piece of scumbag, soon there will be no more rests of you” . Suddenly, I shouted “SEALING TIME: TOTAL SEAL TECHNIQUE” . “A SEALING TECHNIQUE!!!” he said. “DARN YOUU, I WILL COME BACK AND DEFEAT YOU!” said the devil as he disappeared between the round violet circle that led to a portal where all the sealed souls were hidden.
However this technique had a disavantage. If one of its users left the portal not sealed well, the souls could break the portal and escape. I told the people: No time for celebrating, we have to get back to life!

Topic: Off-topic / Battle of Gods

Originally posted by Terence22205:

cool

Thank you

Topic: Off-topic / Battle of Gods

Originally posted by superfastjelly:

Absolutely disgusting.

What’s up with all of you guys? If you don’t like it, then stop reading it but don’t come and throw garbage because you don’t sympathize with the characters or don’t understand the plot. Just make constructive comments that are worth reading.

Topic: Tyrant / Tyrant Errors

At the deck selection screen, when you have chosen the attack and defense decks, their names aren’t showed.

Topic: Off-topic / Battle of Gods

Chapter 4: ¿Future on my hands?

I returned back home with the wand thinking about what had happened. I knew that, against the dragon, I was weak. I needed to get stronger, so I decided to create a new technique. Of course, it’s easier saying than making. When I reached home, I recieved a TV-Call. This was a new implemented sistem to see the person who you’re talking to. It was the mayor ! He told me… “A new threat has appeared, and the only one who has the power to stop it… ITS YOU!!!!!!!!!” . Suddenly an enormous, grey, bad-looking giant appeared and smashed the mayor. At the brink of death, the mayor told me “Go, uruguay… the….future…is…..in…your…hands” and then he died. I quickly grabbed my things and ran to the site. I could feel the anger in my veins.
When I reached there, The giant had gone, but left his tracks all over the place. Inmediately, I followed him. I found him walking to destroy the Parlament. I threw him a Shuriken and he inmediately turned round. He was very furious, for an unknown reason. It seemed to me he was controlled by someone else. He started punching me and told me “So, you’re the one who killed the dragon? And that might be the majestic sword that helped you” . He quickly ran and stole my sword and broke it in half. He was fast, although he was heavy.
I ran to him and started punching him in the leg. He kicked me and walked to where I was and squashed my ribs with his feet: He then went to the parlament. Somehow I managed to stand up and told “ I won’t die this easily, stupid giant!!!!” . I made my RasenKatori.
Suddenly, I had in my hand a circled object with blue thunders getting out of it. I went for the giant, and hit him. “It’s over…” I thought, But Unfortunately I was wrong… The giant was still in one piece. “Hahaha, scumbag. That miserable attacks won’t make me even a scratch. I think its time to finish this, Im done playing with you” he said. He kicked me and threw me away from him. “Well this is the end of the road for me.” I thought “Hehe….To think…. I’d die like this, seeing the parlament, no, the entire village being destroyed by this creature” .
Suddenly… I felt more and more anger flowing through my veins. “Wraaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaagh” I screamed while I felt the power flowing through my entire body. _“What’s this?” I thought. “I never knew I had hidden powers” . I stood up and made my RasenKatori. It was 5 times bigger than before!!!. “ DIEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!” I shouted. “WHAT THE HELL!…I THINK I HAD KILLED HIM!” said the giant.
I could ran much faster than before…. I reached the giant and hit him with my RasenKatori. There was an explosion with the giant in the middle of it. When he was about to die the giant said “To…Believe…He become this strong in half a second…You’re not human” then he died.
The city was safe, and a hero was born that day…but… what awared us in the future? I was again, lucky. I need to control my hidden powers in order to become stronger.

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Topic: Off-topic / Battle of Gods

Originally posted by Fronebular:

Originally posted by cesarcurado:

Originally posted by Fronebular:

Originally posted by Terence22205:

Originally posted by apey99:

Not bad Uruguay! I’m liking the story. Yes there’s a few grammar/spelling errors but that doesn’t affect me, as long as I can read it, I’m fine!

Even better saying that in bold, right?

BOLD IS GREAT, BUT USING CAPS ALONG WITH IT MAKES YOU A KOOL KID.

cool*

You must be out of the cool kids’ click because everyone knows the cool kids spell “cool” as “kool” to emphasize how cool they are.

Come back when you are a kool kid.

EDIT:

Nice story so far uru, I like it.

Thank you for your support.

Topic: Off-topic / Battle of Gods

Please join the story, more users more faster I’ll release the chapter

Chapter 3: The end of the Dragon?

I grabbed the wand, and felt the power running through my body…its knowledge was too awesome. The dragon was talking to me … he told me “ Surrender now and you will have a painless death". “Anata wa watashi ga akirameru ni shiyou to shite o akiramerubeki(You should give up…in MAKING ME GIVE UP!!” I replied. I used the wand power to heal my wounds and create an artificial arm and leg so I could grab my knife. When I reached the Knife, the dragon destroyed it.
When I thought everything was lost…I said “Well, I have no choice other to use this technique”. The technique’s name was Sealing Time: Back to the Underworld. Before I Could finish it… he cut off my extremities and all I could do was waiting for my dead. Suddenly the wand started shining… An angelical figure appeared right in front of me. When he appeared, the tense atmosphere disappeared.. Is it a help from heaven? I asked to myself. “You can’t die here, you have the power to stop this creature, please do so” he said.
He returned me to my normal state and gave me the Sacred Knife the dragon destroyed. I went to the dragon and after a Hard fought battle in which we spent all our energys… he decided to make the final attack. When he was about to burn me, I dodged it and ran towards him, just then I climbed to his back and cut off his head, but, to ensure he wouldn’t return again I used Sealing Time: Back to the Underworld. I was safe from this one…but how many dangers awared me out of there?

Topic: Off-topic / Battle of Gods

Originally posted by Fronebular:

Originally posted by Terence22205:

Originally posted by apey99:

Not bad Uruguay! I’m liking the story. Yes there’s a few grammar/spelling errors but that doesn’t affect me, as long as I can read it, I’m fine!

Even better saying that in bold, right?

BOLD IS GREAT, BUT USING CAPS ALONG WITH IT MAKES YOU A KOOL KID.

LOOOL nice xD

Topic: Everybody Edits / Shockwave Flash

I was mistaken, It’s one or another. If it’s not youtube, its everybody edits, the thing is It never happened to me before.

Topic: Everybody Edits / Shockwave Flash

I’ll plant it in a question Youtube+Everybody Edits= Shockwave Crash? That’s what happening to me, and even if I close it it happens the same in either places…

Topic: Off-topic / Battle of Gods

Here is the chapter we were waiting for!

Chapter 2: Beware of the Dragon
I couldn’t move, all I Could do was waiting. Suddenly they took me their boss, untied me, and tied me back in a “Future” chair where I had to lie down and they put me a brain-explorer device in my head. The process would take about half an hour, and when they finished, they were gonna kill me. After a painful half an hour, they discovered where the secret was. This secret was specially guarded by me, ordered by the mayor of the city. 10 guards took me to a 20 metres high cage underground, where they held a dragon.
They left me alone with the dragon and closed quickly the door that lead upwards. I tried to open it, but it was useless, it was locked from the outside. All of a sudden the dragon got free of its chains and went for me. I started moving backwards till I felt I kicked something backwards, it was a knife!!. I grabbed it, and went for the dragon. When I opened my eyes, I was in a red bland zone, that seemed like the stomach. At that moment, I realized I was eaten by the dragon, and he had bitten me to leave me briefly injured.
At that moment I heard someone telling me “Hey, are you okay?”. “Not really…” I replied, “But who are you?” I asked. “My name is Chicogato. I am like you, I was left to death with the dragon, Fortunately I learnt to survive eating the same as the dragon and avoiding the digestive cells” he said. “Okay we need to get out of here, I’ve only got a Knife, do you know how we can reach this?” I said. “Yes! Just stab the dragon in the heart, but to reach there it’s not easy.” He said
“Fortunately I am a sorcerer and can take us there” he said. We reached the Dragon’s heart and I ran towards it and stabbed my knife in it’s heart. The dragon fell to the ground violently. While we were walking to the mouth to see if we could get out, The cells transformed into a dragon, inside itself. “I see!! This creature belongs to the Five Great Demons, it has unmeasurable powers, and he’s not dead, he’s just faking” I said.

The dragon bite Chicogato’s head off, and he also took one arm and leg of mine. I realized Chicogato’s wand had an amazing power so I decided to struggle to grab it. I had a plan to get out of there, but first I needed to defeat the dragon

Will I be able to escape the dragon’s body or will I suffer the same destiny as Chicogato?

Find out in the next chapter of Battle of gods

Topic: Off-topic / Battle of Gods

Originally posted by DiablosDeAngel:

Uhm, is this a roleplay?

It seems this would belong in the Forum Games

Roleplay? No, not at all, only a story.