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Topic: Kongregate / The Four Kings Tournament [Seeding Round] (MAJOR UPDATE ON PAGE 15)

 
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Topic: Forum Games / Dungeon Dweller Redux [Sign-up and OC thread] [Sign-ups are open]

Everyone, please read this.

I’m currently moving, so I’ll be without internet for some days. So I’ll let BCLEGENDS approve sheets so, when I come back, I can already start the game.

Sorry for the inconvenience

 
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Topic: Forum Games / Dungeon Dweller Redux [Sign-up and OC thread] [Sign-ups are open]

Race: Good

Good is not a race.

(Dominion- Angel)

As the rule 10 says, no rank above Power (That would be the 4th level) is allowed. You can get Virtue (5th level) by demonstrating astonishing ability at writing and proving to not be a complete idiot that will curbstomp everyone with his increased amount of power. Which is very unlikely to happen, as I’d preffer having everyone on a somewhat balanced level. Also, you’d be a fallen angel.

Appearance

Too simple for my tastes. Nothing important, but I’d preffer for you to elaborate

Skills

These are quite too vague. Simple sentences that don’t even reach 10 words.

Magic:

There’s no holy magic in this setting, but I guess you mean “Light”

On another note, your spells are, again, too simple and vague. Elaborate them, please.

Shine doesn’t specify how bright she is
Ray of Light outright states that it kills every “Evil” creature. Which is not only OP, but also kills everyone of your allies
Heal could heal any fatal wound, apparently, without any cost related to it. It heals paper cuts the same way it heals dismembering.
Gust apparently can blow back anything, even mountains, due to the lack of limits stated
Energy blast doesn’t says how powerful it is, nor the cost, nor anything excluding that it’s a powerful blast.
Summon is outright overpowered, as you’r summoning other living beings and this just “makes her sleepy”. Remove this, please.

Biography

Too simple and short. Add more flavor, and stuff.


Also, Avid. You are a member of the Dungeon of Evil, you’d do good in remember. Please fix these problems.

The currently approved persons are: BCLEGENDS, Qwertyuiopazs, Nikeas, Crystalmask, Xandrya, gammaflux and FelineForumer

 
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Topic: Forum Games / [Strategy] -- The Moles -- [Round 1, Task 3: The Trinity] [Deadline: Mar 2 6PM UTC+8]

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Topic: Forum Games / Co-Captain Caption Calamity - Round 1

 
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Topic: Forum Games / Dungeon Dweller Redux [Sign-up and OC thread] [Sign-ups are open]

Originally posted by nikeas:

This deadline is for Gonkey only? Because I was supposed to write my bio today, but had some technical difficulties (i fell asleep). I’m starting to work on it now, so perhaps I won’t be late to the game.

You’ve done nothing wrong, as far as I can see, so I don’t see why you should be deadlined. I’m also going to start adding the accepted players (which I have forgotten to actually tell they’re accepted. Sorry, my bad), and put them in a separate post.

 
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Topic: Forum Games / Dungeon Dweller Redux [Sign-up and OC thread] [Sign-ups are open]

So. Gonkeymonkey. I’m giving you only one chance to fix all that is wrong with your sheet, and I’ll adress it one by one. You’re getting everytime more hard to deal with. Do note that I’ll also have in mind what others may say.

Waterbending (Water): Rilnik can waterbend like people from Avatar. Cost is proportional to the difficulty of a move.

Difficulty is relative. Cost is proportional to the amount of water controlled, the distance of it and its magical properties, among other things.

The easiest move is a waterball

Waterbenders didn’t create water. Fix this

somewhere in the middle is turning water into ice and the most advanced move

Water magic does not allow the ability to alter the state of water. You can only control it when it’s in liquid state.

and the most advanced move he knows is a 50-cm tidal wave

Waterbending does not create water

Firebending (Fire): Rilnik can firebend like people from Avatar. Cost is proportional to the difficulty of a move.

Difficulty is relative. Cost is proportional to the amount of heat generated, distance of the bending and how long you mantain it, among other things

somewhere in the middle is increasing his body temperature to inhumany levels

So you kill yourself.

and the most advanced move he knows is setting things on fire without a flamethrower

That’s basically anything that generates flames that is not a flamethrower.

Rilnik does not know lightning generation, because a magical cat (FelineForumer) doesn’t allow him to

Really?

Magical Darkness (Dark): Rilnik generates a force field that repels light

How big. How long it lasts. How much does it cost. Too vague

Mini-cloud (Steam): Rilnik uses his MYSTICAL MAGICAL STEAM POWERS OF WONDER!

Redundant. (This indicates that you’re using Steam magic)

He forms the steam into a cloud. It can be used as a smoke bomb or a flying device.

It can also be used to asphyxiate every aerobic being in a room. State cost, power, and all that stuff. Don’t. Be. Vague

Acidic Evil (Dark + Water): […] …and renders magic up to Minor unusable and damages the levels of other magic levels temporarily.

Yeah, no. Again, you’re too vague

Pure Evil (Dark + Water)

Helltank summed this one up quite well. You’d do well on reading what he has to say and actually using that as an advice

Cursed fog (Steam + Dark): Rilnik generates fog on a large area and enchants it with dark magic. The fog works as an extension of his senses, allowing him to feel if and where someone is inside the fog.

So, someone lights a fire inside your fog, and now you feel that you’re burning. Someone swings a sword, and you feel like someones cutting you. Very useful, indeed

Dark magic allows the fog to slowly drive someone insane.

Define slowly

Biography:

Did you even put some effort on this?

He wasn’t very popular at school, having only 3 close friends. That’s why he had to have an imagination so awesome that only he could wield it’s power, with anybody else collapsing under the pressure.

How does the rest of the human beings collaps under yoru imagination. Please do tell me how

He learned Water and Fire. Once upon a time, he discovered that he could also create steam.

Yeah, he just magically discovered he could control the secondary magic school of Steam, out of nowhere. Elaborate

and use fog as an extension of his senses.

If you control steam, how do you make it an extension of your senses. Your magical sensorial fog is Dark + Steam. According to the bio you wrote up, apparently you didn’t know Dark magic at that moment. Is that, or I don’t know the properties of the magic of my own setting.

Using his newly discovered hybrid power, he could even make it sunny, cloudy or rainy, or even all at once.

You control steam, not the weather.

He bought his resurrection as a lich from a necromancer in his home village.

He bought his resurrection. Right. He also bought a laser gun, a hi-tech teleporter and a party popper that turns into gorillas that fire poptarts from their bums, because they’re also things that are sold. You don’t buy resurrections

and doing some evil stuff while allied to a secret society known as the Illuminati.

Seriously? Are you even trying to take this seriously? Or are you going to re-use this same character in the same ways you re-used it in many settings? If you’re going to do that, at least put some effort.


Let me remind you: You have only one chance to fix all of this, along with other things the other co-host have pointed out, in the past, present and future. You’ve got until Wednesday. 25/02/2015 at 12:00, UTC -3.


Oh, and don’t try to be a smartass. Just do what you’re asked to do. Remember that, even if I’m the only one who can accept, the other co-hosts can reject you if they feel that your sheet doesn’t works.

 
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Topic: Forum Games / Dungeon Dweller Redux [Sign-up and OC thread] [Sign-ups are open]

Gonkey, a host and another player have already told you many of the problems of your sheet, which have been confirmed by another host. Are you seriously going to keep this childish act? Do you need ANOTHER host to tell you explicitly what the problems on your sheet are? Or are you going to fix the problems on your sheet?

Are you even taking this seriously?

 
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Topic: Kongregate / The Four Kings Tournament [Seeding Round] (MAJOR UPDATE ON PAGE 15)

 
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Topic: Forum Games / Dungeon Dweller Redux [Sign-up and OC thread] [Sign-ups are open]

Originally posted by AvidChristian:

I’m not joining because BC is an ironical, self contradicting, insular dick that complains too much. The other cohosts are fine

Well, no need to insult anybody. Take your personal matter to the personal messages, please.

 
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Topic: Forum Games / Dungeon Dweller Redux [Sign-up and OC thread] [Sign-ups are open]

Originally posted by AvidChristian:

Is it ok if someone’s only light element?

I don’t see why not, although it will be out of place in this setting. You’ll also be easily countered by many beings

 
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Topic: Forum Games / Dungeon Dweller Redux [Sign-up and OC thread] [Sign-ups are open]

Due to some issues that happened, this is what I’ve decided to do. This will sound a bit douchey, and I apologize in advance:

As both of them dislike each other and having them both in the same game would case game disrupting discussions, Gonkeymonkey and Blood_Shadow will each post a character sheet. I’ll choose who gets to stay and who doesn’t.

On another note, please avoid these kind of discussions here. Namely:

Originally posted by Gonkeymonkey:

NOBODY WANTS TO LISTEN TO YOU B_S! TO PROVE YOU WRONG, I’M GOING TO READ IT ALL!
(Only to prove him wrong.)

I see no purpose for this kind of posts but to create conflict for the sake of it. So, yeah. Try to not do that.

 
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Topic: Forum Games / Dungeon Dweller Redux [Sign-up and OC thread] [Sign-ups are open]

Originally posted by BCLEGENDS:
2. You can make a second werecrow character, yes. By the by, folks, I think multiple character signs from one person should be allowed, and I’ll ensure Behemoth gives a solid yes or no to this point, though if it is allowed, other measures may be taken to ensure that you can’t just have your two characters be a perfect undefeatable team with twice as much overall power as any other player wields at any given time. Since, y’know, that would be OP as hell.

Accounting this, yes. You can make another character, but only if allowed to. At the moment, I’m allowing a single character per player until the game advances a little before giving permissions for another one. More than a safery measure, due to the issue BC pointed out.

EDIT: I’ll also be contacting some players to adress some things about their profiles, instead of pointing them out here.

 
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Topic: Forum Games / Dungeon Dweller Redux [Sign-up and OC thread] [Sign-ups are open]

Nikeas:

Ignition: As it is pointed out, you could simply set something ablaze by looknig at it, like eye sockets and other vital points. So, to fix this, you can turn this into a heat beam like spell. The cost will be proportional to the distance of the target, resistance of it, power of the beam and how long you use it, among other things you would like to add to it.

Wind Manipulation: Cost is proportional to the strength of the spell and time used. Sounds good?

Qwerty: The bio seems quite short, although your character’s quite young for those kind of situations.

Mythril Knife: Nigh-unbreakable? Mythril? Please. You can have a steel knife, but no Mythril.

 
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Topic: Forum Games / Dungeon Dweller Redux [Sign-up and OC thread] [Sign-ups are open]

Originally posted by ilovekirby12:

Curious, but where’d you get the info for your codex?

Written up by me and BC (Mostly by BC, to be honest)

 
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Topic: Kongregate / The Four Kings Tournament [Seeding Round] (MAJOR UPDATE ON PAGE 15)

am I pro yet.

 
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Topic: Forum Games / Dungeon Dweller Redux [Sign-up and OC thread] [Sign-ups are open]

Originally posted by BLOODYRAIN10001:

Is my old sign for Dungeon Dwellers compatible with this version or naw?

Your dragon? No. I should’ve clarified earlier, but there are certain races that will be locked for players due to their extremely high natural power. An example is dragons.

 
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Topic: Forum Games / Dungeon Dweller Redux [Sign-up and OC thread] [Sign-ups are open]

Nikeas’ issue: Sign-up whenever you like. There might be moments where I might consider closing the sign-ups (Example, in the middle of a battle event or similar), but otherwise, they’re open

Mar12345: What BC said, basically.

 
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Topic: Forum Games / Dungeon Dweller Redux [Sign-up and OC thread] [Sign-ups are open]

Originally posted by coolo2011:

None of the links to accounts in the third post work.

Fixed, it was a formatting mistake (Sorry)

 
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Current Players

  1. BCLEGENDS
  2. Qwertyuiopazs
  3. Nikeas
  4. 10crystalmask01
  5. Xandrya
  6. gammaflux
  7. FelineForumer