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12:00AM
by starrainarts
加去主畫面，方便快捷開玩
安裝呢隻遊戲
撳分享掣，再揀「加到主畫面」，就即刻安裝呢隻game，方便快啲入返嚟玩。
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12:00AM
12:00AM 關聯標籤
簡介
Text based horror game that requires you to make the right decisions in order for you and your friend Jason to survive, discover the mystery of the death of Marcus.
玩法說明
Point and click
留言
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1Yearwonder
Oct. 11, 2018
REALLY good!! I like the suspense, I'm intrigued by the story so far, and the atmospheric touches are done very well. Some grammatical errors could use attention, as they interfere with immersion. In the living room text it should say "where your cat" not "were your cat", the third sentence of the text in the office says "Despite you having an office job, it is only today was you make your way back into the very room that gave you comfort and entertainment". Other than that, there are a few places the wording gets a little awkward, like the final sentence in the living room. If you split that sentence in to two, the ideas you're trying to convey might be a little easier to understand.
Other than a few places that could use some finishing touches, this looks like an awesome game. You do a great job of building suspense and mystery, leaving just enough clues to keep things interesting, without spoiling the ending. I'm really looking forward to the final version!
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Thanks for the feedback 1Yearwonder i will surely sort out those mistakes that you were mentioning, thanks for pointing those out.
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