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When I first saw this, I thought it was about a girl finding her love. But then, it turns out to be an interpretation about love's place in various people's hearts.
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Nice art and fun characters. I liked the Lust ending and the message. I liked the Treachery ending's message, but it was too obvious to see it coming. Her name is Treachery after all. The good ending was rather lame actually. The actual game play isn't much and I hated having to go get the glasses even if I had all the sprites already.
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To get the third ending, the good one, deny Lust and Treachery and then go to the old house and talk to the old man and accept his offer.
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I got all 3 endings! Jenifer Lust, Anne Treachery, and Old Man, Old Man has a different name which is revealed at the end of his story! Old man was a bit bugged but I eventually got the ending! Great game!!!!!!!!!
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Mistake: Rich house: There ARE nothing more valuable than money. ARE > IS
Not being a grammar nazi, just trying to help.
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Can't say I liked the morale (at least in the love and lust ending - lust combined with love is great in my book), but the game is really well made (language issues aside). 5 stars here.
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The English version could use some editing of the text to fix spelling and grammar issues. If you'd like some help with that, let me know....
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The artwork is wonderful. I really liked the pay offs of the characters' names. Love and Lust first go hand in hand, but if worst comes to worst, they may go their separate ways. Love makes Gloom disappear, etc.
Still Gloom's quest appeared to have nothing to do with the crisis going on. If there had been more such good deed quests to be solved in order to flee, instead of the look-for-icon one, I think it would have been more cohesive.
Some bugs: I fell off the screen of the old house. I could see the other side of the backdrop, when I approached the right edge of the screen.
All in all, I believe that you have a lot of talent and I'd love to see more of your work, but you still need a bit of practice and someone to proofread your work, since there are a lot of mistakes.