Thank you so much for your input. Now, when you keep left click down, the hero will auto-attack but your walking speed is reduced to 80% . Btw, press Q to switch weapons :)
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I'm a bit of writer and this really makes me want to hit you over the head I mean bloody check your work i mean really write your script in Microsoft word or something with a spell checker and then put the script in the game jeez!! all and all you need to redo the hole game i mean the storyline was petty good but you need grammar and spelling never post a game if it's so half built i don't want to play it
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Great idea, sadly executed! If the spelling and grammar and all that were better, it might be more enjoyable!! Its a fantastic idea! Just needs to be written better! Good job all the same!
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Mates, I will never update this game. I think that I won't make games for a long time from now, so stop reporting bugs, please..
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I won!!! This is a cool game. Its a good concept, but as others have pointed out you can improve on the spelling and grammar. It could also have a better gui, and you could improve on story in some places. 3/5
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Pretty good game, but next time have some friends proof read it before uploading it, and ask them not to hold back on criticism (especially about the spelling and grammar).
I also think you should add an option to start from the last choice or campaign checkpoint, as its frustrating artibarily dying at the end. Also you might want to play The Sagittarian trilogy on newgrounds, especially the second one, you'll find it quite inspiring
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Concept is great. Very unique having a game that lets the story continue even if you are undead. But it obviously needs A LOT of work. I wouldn't mind this being a text adventure like it is now, but it needs a much better story, pictures, a progress map would be cool, maybe some music, and then you could have an amazing game.
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The reason grammar and spelling is so important is because text is the only thing we have to draw us into the game. A good text adventure can keep you interested without needing any graphics or even any sound. No matter how good your story is, a simple spelling mistake can make it seem ameturish and break any mood you've created. Also, bad grammar can really damage the flow of a paragraph and hinder the building up of tension and/or immersion. That's why.
As for this, aside form it's errors, it was ok.The story barely made sense and there seemed to be no logic to the options, but it wasn't a total loss.
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Whilst not the greatest game I've ever played, it's clear that a lot of thought and effort have gone in to it. Also, respect for listening to criticism and making an effort to improve based on them.
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not that bad of a game and hey we all cnt be perfect in how we spell and where we put out .'s at. i always liked the chose ur adventure books as a kid and this is the first time ive seen a game like that but maybe some illustration would have given it the flare it need 3/5 keep up the good work and dnt let these punks get u dwn for being imperfect at least ur making playable half way decent games compared to the rest of the crap that has been flooding kong lately ( ie gamestop)
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"Put your cursor on letters, and then click." Yes, I'm aware that that's how it works. However, it would be much easier and more instinctive if the options were in text boxes or similar, rather than having to fiddle about with the cursor to ensure it's on a very thin part of a letter before clicking.
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Fun game. I like it! Even though I'm a Grammar Gestapo. I like how the story changes. I commend you, for worse games have been made!
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I agree that the spelling and grammar could be improved upon. More than that, though, each option is very hard to click on. If these were rectified the game would still be fairly simple but could be somewhat fun.
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@MarioF, it may be because someone has put in the time and effort to put something together, yet only a little more time and effort would have been good enough to fix the problem.
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Why does some bad spelling and grammar bother you guys so much..I mean, okay the game isn't that great but amusing...and the text is understandable despite the mistakes...so i give it a 3/5.
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The grammar is the most horrific part of this crappy "choose your own adventure" game. The description is terrible, the instructions are worse, and the game play takes the shit cake trophy of the day. Congrats Gheata - I played the game. Please have the decency of removing it now
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I like choose your own adventure games but the spelling and grammatical errors in this one really detract from the story.