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I got to the first jumping puzzle, and maybe I'm missing something, but I dont see how its supposed to be completed. Im just sorta randomly spamming space hopping something will happen.
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Brilliantly put together. And so relatable to anyone who has been in a relationship that didn't last. Even if not you still do a great job of setting the tone. The end hit me like a rock. Great game.
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*snif *soo good yet soo sad I love this game I really am crying ITS SO GOOD!!!!! I think this is the greatest story ever*sniff* :*( I LOVE IT favorite.
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I'm sorry, as much as you tried, I will not give this "game" a high rating.
It becomes a little too obvious, that "emotional" games are becoming something of a stylish trend and it is fine with games, that actually have their "emotional" part and "game" part connected and intertwined into one piece.
This piece here has no connection of each aspects (the emotional and game part). I can just as easily play the whole game without the text appearing on my screen, which in the end proved to be simply annoying.
To me the emotional part is just an excuse to a lousy game content.
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The whole time you were making me think... and emotionally breakdown, it's very hard to leave your love but you know it's for the greater good for both of you and this portrayed amazing and in such a saddening way that I was blinded with tears... Just amazing and such a touching game that gets you thinking, 5/5 from me. I won't forget about this game anytime soon
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Simple, yet amazing. There should be more games like this. Not only it was fun to play, but you really get sucked into your character, you really for sorry for the loss of you relationship.
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I'm there too, but ours was a much more vile and pointless ending.. or parting.. either way I agree, tough to move forward and hard to look away, no matter how much you want to. No matter how much you need to.
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Says you updated a blackscreen bug, but I can't play after the first platforming part where it says "She and I were fine with this distance". I can press escape and restart the scene, but it doesn't work and only shows text. I'm using Chrome.
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5/5 for breaking old trends. I really appreciate games delivering a message. All but mindless! Also I think all top comment criticism is out of date by now. Keep creating unique things! =)
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I am sure that someone has already said this but please lock the mouse, i don't like my mouse floating out of the screen, i would like my cursor to stay in the game and end up on the far side of my screen. Great game but that one aspect was pretty annoying. Looking forward to your future creations
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Wow, at first I didn't get it, I played it one before, but also got stuck. Seriously this game even for a 15 minute "flash" game, it has made me feel emotions long gone, almost as if I were having emotions from a child-hood memory, but as I am an adult, it was a great feeling. I absolutely loved this game. Definitely going to play again with headphones.
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Whao, a really nice game that lets the player relfect upon one's feelings through out and after the game. I love how you represented the jounery of the relationship through the change of the blocks. Initially it was flat then it became inclined and finally smaller. I was also quite surprised at the escaping part that was well shown as you leave her and run towards a closing gate. Music was very nice and something that most games here on kong doesn't have. Overall, 5/5 from me. Nice game.
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Good concept. I really enjoyed it, after i found out that i had to have the sound on, playing with it off takes it to a whole new level :P
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I got to the first part that required jumping, found it very frustrating, gave up. I sent it to a friend, they stopped at the same point. If I could give one piece of advice for a revision; make the platforming section more streamlined or more obvious at least to start with. I literally couldn't figure out which one I should jump on next/how to proceed. I was playing for maybe 3 minutes at that point, not very invested yet; so it was easy to get annoyed. I know you aren't trying to make a 'fun' game but I've been gaming all my life and couldn't find the next platform. I hate to say something like 'i couldn't figure it out so it sucks,' but I feel as though if I found it unclear, someone who is balls deep in the language of video games, then a fair percentage will also find it unclear. You want players to get your message, hold their hand for a bit for a bit, just as you held hers. I don't think a bit of streamlining will undermine your message, but then again I haven't beaten it.
Thanks for the candid and constructive crit - I've streamlined that section a bit, adding lighting and removing a very specific platform that kept tripping some people up. If you could try it again and PM me your new impressions I'd deeply appreciate it! You might need to clear your browser's cache to play the just uploaded version, just fyi.
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You forgot to mention that mouse controls the aim. There are also some bugs with restarting at certain checkpoints, got black screened :(
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So much to say about this, I can't say it all... so beautiful. It doesn't "hold your hand" like a lot of games today. I had a hard time letting go in the end. I definitely want to play this with my surround sound another day when it's not so late at night.