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Promised all of these different things like having enemies actually damage you and a title screen but you never delivered thanks 11 year old no mans sky dev
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The comment I made about the "floor" thing was meant to describe this:
http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/6/exampleuz.png/
You shouldn't really be able to walk on the pieces that would be on the inside. Only the parts with solid colors or something should define what's solid and what isn't.
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3 - All the "floor" you walk on isn't really complete. For example, the "You Win!" level. You're walking on the tiles that should be on the inside of the platforms. Instead of walking on the same tile, maybe add some variation on tiles that you can walk on?
4 - The background is kind-of dull. It's just blue, nothing more. Maybe add hills/houses/something in the background?
5 - You don't even have a goal, really. All you do is pretty much move to the right, and when you start on the right, then you move to the left. Give the player a goal, maybe?
6 - (Last one) How about making a victory screen instead of a playable "Victory" level? Maybe have "Mambo" standing on top of a pile of dead "Pronger"s?
2/5, shows room for improvement, but hasn't quite reached that level of "decent" just yet.
I dont understand the "floor" comment,Ill try to make the background better,ill try to think of a goal and implement it,and the Victory level isnt actually the last level,the last level doesnt have mambo in it, so you know youve won. ill think about a better ending screen for the real ending though.
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The sprite work was nicely done for the main character and the enemies, but I see a few problems with this game.
1 - The enemies, which look like they'd hurt you if you touched their fronts or backs, are just squishable blocks. They don't move, and they don't hurt you if you run into them. If you had to do "Kill all the enemies" on a screen to progress, if there's a ledge, you can just chuck them off. Maybe add a health bar and let them be able to hurt you when you touch their front/back and add droppable HP?
2 - There's no title screen; it just drops you off in the middle of the game. Maybe add a title screen with options for a New Game, Continue Game, Options, and anything else necessary?
Along with this, maybe add some sort of music?
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good concept.. art is decent too.. pretty easy controls.. i could see this game being better with more objectives and less random levels with nothing in them... keep working at it... if this is your first game then you have some good games ahead of you
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Same here... no mobs in level 4-5-6 and no way to exit level 6... or anything (no menu button to return main screen) !