I'm guessing you made this game because of the story-line...? I actually enjoyed the story-line and the explanation of why story is kind of mind-boggling.
It may be confusing at first, but once you manage to get the final timeline. It makes sense in a way, I like how your story explains why Christina lit the the fire in the first place, Troy's deception, and Lionel's involvement in the game.
Steve's ending is kind of confusing, but at the same time is foreshadowing the "other" current events of any of the other story-line.
I actually enjoyed your game, and it's only because of the story. Confusing at first, but once you fit all the pieces, the story isn't too confusing.
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