I don't know how to feel about this game.
On one hand, it is undeniably derivative of the Company of Myself - the exact same narrative style with white words that fade in and out with that same dreamlike quality. It even adds in a second character, presumably the girl he's in a relationship with.
On the other hand it has great artwork, and having the background with changing seasons was a nice touch - I assumed it symbolized the time passing as their relationship continued. It's cute and has a feel-good quality to it.
I'm a little bit confused about the grammar. I think that it should be checked over, ESPECIALLY the last lines because they didn't make much sense. Simply getting someone to edit the English would suffice, because even though the game itself is good, some of it was ruined by the poor grammar.
Overall I guess it's a good game, I just think they could have taken it a little farther and added more elements to distinguish it from The Company of Myself.
Story is actually about Orpheus, not Oedipus. Sorry normally I wouldn't correct such a thing, but Oedipus is famous for marrying his mother and committing incest, so I feel like I needed to clarify. Orpheus' wife, Eurydice, had died from a venomous bite from a snake. Orpheus bravely traveled to the underworld to get her back, and was the first and only person to move the God of the Underworld, Hades, by playing his music. He allowed Orpheus to have Eurydice back on one condition - he couldnt look back at her unless BOTH were outside of the Underworld. There are a few variations on the story but the most common one is, as soon as he had stepped outside the Underworld, he anxiously looked back only to see her fade away.
I really love Greek mythology and this was an amazing interpretation and representation of such a moving story. Thank you. It's because of games like these I'm going to seriously consider donating game developers...once I actually get a job and paypal, that is...
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