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ZS Dead Detective - Graves & Secrets

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Nov. 10, 2018

Rating: 0

At the grave dealer's, part of Ghvnn's speech bubble is covered up by the building.

ZS Dead Detective - Murder Case

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Nov. 10, 2018

Rating: 8

It's not "only touch me," it's "so much as touch me." The former implies the opposite of what you're trying to convey.

ZS Dead Detective - A Curse In Disguise

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Nov. 10, 2018

Rating: 1

After Awk is arrested, Margh will still ask if he stole the vase in his house, even though he's not there.

ZS Dead Detective - A Curse In Disguise

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Nov. 10, 2018

Rating: 0

"Proof" is never plural.

ZS Dead Detective - A Curse In Disguise

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Nov. 10, 2018

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Cough's head doesn't talk when you pull it out of your pocket, but his mouth still moves and everyone still acts like he said something.

ZS Dead Detective - A cat's chance in hell

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Nov. 09, 2018

Rating: -13

She also says "I sincerely hate that kind of people." It should be "those kinds of people" or "that kind of person."

ZS Dead Detective - A cat's chance in hell

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Nov. 09, 2018

Rating: -9

At the end, the Cat says "why not leaving with a bang?" It should say "leave," not "leaving."

ZS Dead Detective - A cat's chance in hell

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Nov. 09, 2018

Rating: -6

"Growth and "mouth" don't rhyme.

ZS Dead Detective - A cat's chance in hell

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Nov. 09, 2018

Rating: -5

About an earlier comment of mine: sorry, I meant commissioner, not chief.

ZS Dead Detective - A cat's chance in hell

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Nov. 09, 2018

Rating: -3

If you go off-screen to the right in front of the gun shop, instead of going to the map, nothing happens until you click the screen again. Then some message flashes for a second, but it disappears to quickly for me to read.

ZS Dead Detective - A cat's chance in hell

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Nov. 09, 2018

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That fat human in the zombie mask has a serious case of "Trump hair." By that, I mean it looks overly dramatic, not fake.

ZS Dead Detective - A cat's chance in hell

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Nov. 09, 2018

Rating: 0

At the mayor's introduction, the chief said to stop by if they needed any more "infos;" There's no such word. "Info" is short for "information," so it can't be plural.

Dead Detective vs Nine Deaths Cat

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Nov. 09, 2018

Rating: -1

"Harden" and "burden" don't rhyme. Try something like "pardon" for the last line.

Dead Detective vs Nine Deaths Cat

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Nov. 09, 2018

Rating: 3

When the statue is in Slobber's studio, the left leg has exposed bone, but when it's in the museum, the right leg has exposed bone, instead.

Dead Detective vs Nine Deaths Cat

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Nov. 09, 2018

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cont. …combined with "Slobber says Kashl used to be a gentle man." (Also, try a different adjective. "Gentle man" is a little confusing since it's too much like "gentleman.")

Dead Detective vs Nine Deaths Cat

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Nov. 09, 2018

Rating: 0

When you combine the clues "the Nine Deaths Cat's message is directed at Kashl, the art collector" and "the Nine Deaths Cat always warns his victims before the heist," it displays a message about a totally different clue, "many people consider Kashl to be a evil, heartless businessman". (BTW, it should say "an evil," not "a evil.")

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Nov. 09, 2018

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When you ask Kashl about why the 'Cat sent the message to Slobber, he says she probably just wanted "the prestiege of having one of 'his' pieces in my museum." It should say "one of 'her' pieces."

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