kind of personal for me, so It lacks a bit of the meaning that it could have. I think that making and publicly releasing this probably helped you with whatever you where needing to over come, so I am glad you posted it. 5/5, because it takes some guts to share anything personal on the internet.
Well, there are some interesting points, but all great meaningful works have more than one lesson to learn! I think the girl Isn't necessarily a girl. It might be any goal that the boy is working towards. As he works, he comes close to falling off many edges, and goes to places he may have never been. but, in the end, while his world seemingly becomes more colorful, he himself slowly 'fades' away. When he does completely fulfill his goal, he is completely consumed by it, and fades away into the wind. Maybe not so bad, if you consider that death is just a passage into a different 'place'. Might not be so sad after all, but then again, his goal may not have been such a good one.... Just helping people to think a bit more though, the game is great in itself, 5/5!
US quadrillion.