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I was making a point. The “way to improve” that you are complaining about me allegedly not providing tied into the point I was making. You missed both. Not my fault.

I’ll clarify somewhat, though: I wasn’t judging you. First off, if you’d understood what I was trying to say, you’d realize that was a pep-talk. A nice one? No, I’ll own up to that, but it was one, nonetheless. Second, I was saying, ‘if one negative comment is all it takes to trip you up, you’re going to be falling flat on your face a lot in this world.’

Third, what are you upset about? I commented on your game, which you willingly submitted for everyone to comment on on this site. No one twisted your arm to make you receive the criticism of others and it’s not like I insulted your mom.

So my comment wasn’t positive. So what? Free country, I’m afraid. I’m not saying it was pleasant to read what I said, but it was intended to motivate you. I’m not trying to be a jerk, you just happen to have triggered my abrasive side. But as horrible as you seem to think I am, even then, I mean well. I’m just not in the mood to coddle anyone right now. Come back in… two weeks if you wanna see the cuddly, gentle-giant side of me. Otherwise, you’re outta luck.

Is there anything of yours that was not made with flash that is available for viewing? I’m willing to admit when I’m wrong, if you really have developed your talent to moderate or professional level. I’d enjoy a good distraction, too, if it’s the kind of game within my preferred genres. (You’re making a living off of games at 17?)

Lastly: You know I never said anything about what you could or could not post so don’t make a federal case over something that didn’t happen. I offered you advice. You don’t wanna take it, whatever, it doesn’t make a difference to me. But if you get a reputation for only posting half-baked, crappy stuff…isn’t that a bad thing? I said refine your work to the point of decency before submitting it so it’ll be worth your time and everyone else’s. If you really want further advice: Try seeking out a mentor around here.

No, actually, they haven’t. I’m a part-time writer. People who read my work, hell—even my random comments—often to ask me to write more. If that comment was too difficult for you to read or respond to, there’s nothing I can do about that. Anyway, I see you’re ignoring my offer to check out your alleged better work, so we’re done here. Good luck and goodbye.