very nice, the only thing you should get rid of is the red letters telling us that lave is hot and holy shit ;) basicly everybody knows its going to get bad when you jump into red glowing water ;) (and the writing you chose looks a bit childish ;) )
but honestly, thats the only point thats a bit complainable in this awsome game :)
3/5 one star goes losse for the simplicity, the other one for the ending that had gone missing. i mean honestly, ive found everything and get like, nothing? you aint serious, are you? but netherless its still a well amde game, even if not being fully my kind of enjoyment.
finaly, you found out how to make real good games and you came down from your only one life trip.
see you created a simple 5 stars game, keep that way and your games keep rocking
hm although there are many points where i agree with the developer, i must say that i strongly disagree with some of hist points.
first: overuse of pai system (kreds or whatever) do ruin some games - ceasary 4 example.
second: i dont rate "girl" games down, since i mostly dont play em, but be honest - do you count dress-ups truely as games?
third: the countless tutorial-clones do deserve no other than 1/5 ;)
to some of the comments: i agree that there are people that rate games up just because of it shows female charackteres with actual real-female components- but calling everybody a pervert just because of this is just ridicioulus. be honest - shouldn'T -you- pay a visit to our friend Dr. Freud. (and leave the little boys the fun - they don't get the real thing yet ;) )
btw: 1/5 cause you asked
nah just kidding ;) and sorry 4 my spelling mistakes ^^
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