the game has a really good idea but it's WAY TOO EASY. i had to rate it with 2 stars because i just... i could've won all the lvls with the basic pistol. there was NO dificulty at all.
Besides the lag, I enjoyed the idea. Would've liked equipable skills and more 'classes' based on the weapons, perhaps more stats.. you know. Good game tho!
Take no offense... It's great that you've enjoyed working on this and decided to write it for so long, but there are many things that you should've worked a lot more on. I'm not going to get too clinical or precise about it since it's just a comment, but I guess that if you dedicated so much time to something then you must probably care about it. Anyway, try getting some writing classes, read more books, there's no way this story could be interesting "as it is" outside this choose your own adventure format, in a flash games site. Good luck to you tho, and I do hope you get better at this if you really want to.
Thanks for the feedback! This was definitely written for the format. I understand that the writing style wouldn't work as a normal novel. I put a lot of effort into making it as short and concise as possible because that's what the format requires. I should say that this is inspired by previous drafts more than anything else. For example, in the previous non-interactive draft, Faith was actually 3 different characters, but I just consolidated as much as possible to make it into an interactive game with as little text as possible. I also realize that my writing style is pretty dry; I don't really attempt the super flowery artsy language style because I'm not good enough to pull it off. Anyway, please feel free to send me a private message if you have more specific advice or feedback!
It's never taken me so much time to win a flash game. Congratulations to the developers, the game WAS of course a little bit repetitive but the different enemies and their characteristics still made me want to keep playing and finding new strategies to defeat them. I'm pleased with this game, and I've rated it 5/5. Thank you for this game, just finished it with all the achievements!
GOOD GAME. LEARN FROM THIS. disliked the end mention to wwii tho, kinda banalizes the message by being put there in such a still small and superfluous game.
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Use groups management: shift+number to set a group, and press that number to select a group. Also, I'll implement hotkeys for each class.