Part 2:
- The collision detection of the character is not the same. When the player stands, it is correct. When the player walks, then it is a bit too high, so the character swings up and down when moving, which make the controls a bit harder.
- When you press jump and a direction key, the player don't move and stands on the ground with the jumping animation. Also jumping in tight passages is not possible correctly, cause the collision detection could be better. The player got stuck.
Many thanks for your valuable suggestions and focus on my game, I will the next version of the attention and to improve the game thank you. I hope you can always focus on my game
Part 1
Here are some new suggestions:
- The player could slide less when stopping the movement.
- On level 2, the platform sometimes moves a bit lower when the player jump on it. This leads to a blocking of the platform movement.
- The text colors between the levels are not readable enough. You could change the color to red, or give them an darker outline.
- The lava block at level 2 will be moved upwards when colliding with the lift. When this happens, the level can not be beaten. When a player takes some time with collecting the coins, then the time is enough for the block to be lifted up.
Nice 3D graphics. I think the background (clouds) should be matching the graphics in the finished version. If someone wants extra fun, try to swing back to the start point :D
I found an error at the start. When you continuosly click without pause, the character moves through the rock and the vine is cut.
Needs a taskbar, where the player can see, which tasks will be made. I saw that the player can click very fast and choose the actions, but letting the player know what actions he has chosen with some graphics would improve the gameplay.
A description of the garderobe would be a good addition. I did found out very late, that the player is possible to trash the wrongly chosen cloth.
Great game.
Needs some work. At least you could add highscore and achievements.
Flying targets, music, backgrounds, weapons etc would improve the gameplay. I think you can do better work.
The colors are very bright. But it is a good dress up game, nonetheless. It should be possible to dress the bridegroom too. I also recommend to add a print button.
Great polished puzzle game. The only thing that I would add, is the ability to collect the carrots that are thrown on the ground by accident. They roll down the buttons when they are near the edge.
The time could be stopped between the spawning and the death of the star. I found level 3 very hard. The difficulty makes a huge step between level 2 and 3.
It would be better to replace all the "alien approach"-kit graphics and create more custom ones like the squid.
Otherwise looking forward for the finished game. Don't let yourself be demotivated by my comment!
There seems to be no difference between the first two pictures. I tried many times, and clicked the whole screen. Otherwise if there is a difference then the difficulty is too high for a first level. It needs a tutorial and a reveal button like shown in other difference games.
OK I finished the game. The game has 3-4 levels. A highscore would be a good idea. The difficulty curve isn't that high angled, as described, cause there is a small amount of levels, and I got the clock items, that didn't appear before my first comment. The game could be a bit more expanded, but for a short and fast minigame it is ok.
The description, that the player loses the time when beeing hit is missing. I thought there would be something like health, but it is the time that decreases. Otherwise it is a bit fast. The second level is hard. The difficulty curve could be a bit less high-angled.
Great idea and realisation. I think it needs the possibility to use a guest account without any features, also chatting should then be disabled, cause of spammer etc. Maybe people just like to see what others have build without registing an account.
As mentioned by ricolh, the spawning at level 3 is really bad. The rocket spawns directly before a rock, and the player has just 1/2 second to move to the right and brake.
You can find the same problem at the spawning point of level 4 and level 5
You could add a tutorial. The game is nice, and breaking the borders of the levels is a really great idea. The gameboy style is great too.
There is also space for some upgrades or temporaly power ups, like a higher firerate and a bigger fuel tank or a shield that prevents the player from dieing directly. Otherwise, there is also space for some score multiplyer powerups.
The fuel tanks shouldn't be destroyable, even if it is a logical step when shooting at them. But the game itself is hard enough (still at level 5 and 45 levels to the end). The fuel tanks shield some enemies, and there is no really way to avoid a collision without destroying the tanks.
Great work.
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Many thanks for your valuable suggestions and focus on my game, I will the next version of the attention and to improve the game thank you. I hope you can always focus on my game