Subzero didn't make the game, he's just quoting it from lucidrine. As for the grammical issues, it really isn't that bad. At least you can still understand what they're saying. Also, lucidrine, it would be better if you had someone to edit it. You did a good job writing it, but you probably wouldn't get so many complaints about the text if it was given a look over from someone else.
This is absolutely one of the best flash games that I've ever played, no joke. It has a good storyline, and the action gets very intense. The gameplay was not the most original, but the story was what kept me playing. Despite a few typos in the story, it was exciting to follow, although it was not as deep as I would like it to be. All in all, this game kept me hooked and I would love to see more from you. 4/5
I like ants when they go ka-boom. But in real life, not here. These kinds of games shouldn't be uploaded here (unless this was really the author's intention, which it probably wasn't).
BTW If I'm hurting ur feelings I'm sorry.