Krazy's first game (IN TESTING)

Give it a storyline so it has a purpose, makes people think they’re duty bound to be the hero and save the world. Remember to consider elements that other people might be attracted by to build a diverse community for your game, not just what you want. Hopefully you won’t take this the wrong way and you’ll consider it as you build this game. Remember, all developers were once kids fascinated by making an entity move from Point A to Point B in X seconds. If you put your mind to it, you could make this a good game. For now, I’ll give this game 5/5 as a friendly gift and a starter boost to give it a chance. I’ll also favorite so I can keep tabs on it. Good luck, can’t wait to see what you make of this!!

First of all, Krazy, you know I wouldn’t criticize you just to be an asshole. I don’t know what happened in Time World and I don’t really care. So, onto the game now that the possible feels are out of the way. Like Takah said, you should test it for bugs first. Preparation is key. There’s not much point in putting a game that doesn’t work on the site other than to get people to see it. But that would work against you if people rated it badly… So yeah, just remember that if you make any more. I realize it says (IN TESTING) but you should keep it to yourself in that stage. Next, the face isn’t very appealing. Use a thinner brush to draw it if you’re going to make it that small because some people might get creeped out and rate & run. Also, putting a proper title and some tags would give people an idea of what they’re walking into. If you want people to know that it’s your first game that bad, put it in the description. Lastly, some people like the roleplaying element of a game.

Awesome game Krazy!!

Shouldn't games be thoroughly tested before submitting to a game site? It looks like it was made in about 20 seconds. Make sure it works at all before submitting.

...so what exactly are you meant to avoid, other than disappearing off the screen?