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Though clunky at times, the sheer amount of dialogue you've written is impressive beyond measure--and just a little work with literary editor could ease the clunkiness to boot. I wanna wish you well as you flesh out this story, and I can't wait to see what you've got planned for 2018! 4/5
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I haven't finished the game yet (or whatever is currently playable) but I don't trustt Rae (I am currently in the stairwell and i realized the first two messages from Sent were recorded, he said that... but the others Rae wasn't there, and idk my gut just tells me he is being to protective over his secrets, plus he never told us his contact at all. Please add your opinion or disprove my theory.
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I is a really good game but I lose my progress over and over again once it froze so I refreshed the page and poof my progress is gone please fix
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Maybe somebody should have suggested hitting the box first to Beth, at the end of episode 17. It probably wouldn't work, but might be worth a shot.
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Dear Percon,
Both you and this game inspire me. I may be the world's biggest noob when it comes to creating games, but someday I hope to make something like this, something so epic, so cool, something that leaves people eager for more. I look forward to the second part of Exit/Corners, and until then... *tips hat*
-et246
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Oh my god I want to play this game so much, I'm on the 10th episode but every time I try to resume or start from the previous chapter it freezes..
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I just learned that, when you press enter to move to a new line when you're writing your comment, Kongregate doesn't keep that when you post
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I could honestly see this as a pretty good short anime. I even have an idea of who would voice each of the contestants.
Ink: Vic Mignogna/Johnny Yong Bosch
Aether: Monica Rial/Luci Christian
Rae: Johnny Yong Bosch/Chris Sabat
Beth: Linda Young
Liza: Cherami Leigh
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Wow, I enjoyed this a lot. I really started to care about the characters towards the end -- can't wait for more chapters!!
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Well, great. Now I'm committed to the interesting story and well-fleshed out characters and the rest isn't done yet. I guess I'll just have to wait... or I could die.
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i really don't get it with the colors of mail, print, record and home. some device i don't know? do i have to buy an iphone?
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I am glad that some like this "game" but I am not among them. There did not appear to be a way to lose...as long as you can click...and as far as I can tell, there are not alternative paths. They walk you through the puzzles and you spend more time clicking than working on the puzzles. I love smart games and am not opposed to storytelling in a game, but this was too much. Half the battering between contestants was unnecessary to the story. I highly doubt I will continue this "game" if more comes out. It is not fun. The overall plot is inventive, but the dialogue is too overwhelming to enjoy. The author (as its more a story than a game) put a lot of time into it, but I think they lost sight of what really was needed.
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3 hours of scrolling through text, combined with 3 minutes of game play. If that sounds fun to you, then this is the game for you!
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Chapter 14 puzzle has (at least) another solution. You should accept both or fix the hint to exclude the most logical one...
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So Kim/Ink is definitely trans, I'm pretty sure Aether and Beth (or "Bether" as I call them) are the same person, and the "puzzle" at the end of each corner (no, at the end of the game) is to make each person WANT to live. When Rae accepts losing an arm, it'll release his.
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well done for inventing a game that takes 2hrs of reading pointless text, followed by a puzzle that takes around 5seconds to solve, followed by 2hrs more pointless text and repeat endlessly.....