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as soon as i played this game and it ended i knew une was gonna kick those peoples butts cause this is a one of a kind game.i crys my butt off when they burned yun
;.; sooooooooo sad
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A Sad visual novel i've seen. Even though, there was a good ending with the girl survived. it was still melancholy... Yun must be so sad when he was tied to the pole T.T
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I enjoy the music, if only it was on youtube... replaying nonstop while playing other games on a different tab, muted both bgm an sfx.
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if you people wonder why they blame yun
its because when people experience hardships...they blame it on other people so they wont feel too cuilty of what happened....
awesome story
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ahhhh its so sad i hate tat they blaamed it all on yun but haha revenge if yun was alive we wouldve been great friends
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It is very beautiful and in fact almost everyone agrees to its per-found beauty and impact to the ones reading and interacting with this fine work. Words alone cannot explain and if you have a heart for understanding every bit of emotion portrayed in the VN here well we all can understand the words "These seeds were only meant for me..." So in total great job keep up the good work and I'll give it a 100/10 for the story and 1000/10 for the animation.
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I liked the concept of the story and the soundtrack. Nevertheless, the novel seems a bit shallow. I guess I was expecting a more profound story. The images are good too, but a bit repetitive.
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I winced every time I heard a song that I recognized from some other game, but the very well accompanied the tale, so it's not a problem.
Great job overall. It is, as they say, "short and sweet".
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cool, i dunno if it has anymeaning, but i noticed each character had a different color to them, une-purple,yun-green, hierde-brown, elder- gray, and i could not help but think why blame yun? if he had abilities most peolple did not, like predicting misfortune, could those abilities be used for the villiage?
either way, i noticed that yun seems to be some osrt of holy child? those who trusted in him were slower to be affected...
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It was really nice and I enjoy your work. The story could be longer and deeper as Ofdenson said. Try next time to create more ending paths.thx!
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Just because professional wrestling says up front that it isn't science fiction doesn't mean it belongs on the science fiction channel...
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TehGramarNatzee: Basing a rating on grammar in something that is entirely text and is described as a "visual novel" is not retarded, it's reasonable. The whole of a rating shouldn't be based on it, but if you're presenting something like this you don't want the players/readers distracted by typos and grammatical mistakes. Not everyone will be, but people who will appreciate a text "game" are those who will..
Zeiva: Nice art, but I wish the story was deeper and longer. More choices would be nice, but the main thing is the story felt kind of thin. More emotion, more character development. Just a suggestion for your next story which I hope you make.
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I don't like that the villagers knew that Yun had said it'd be a bad year for rice... they said they thought nothing of it at the time, so they wouldn't have been likely to say anything about it right?
Oh, and Gramarnatzee, as far as rating a game by it's grammatical abilities goes, that's all good in most cases, but when a game is based almost solely around words (in this case, a story game with visual elements) It helps to make sure that the wording is proper. Still though, I enjoyed both endings of this game, nicely made. If you did all the artwork, my hat is off to you, some of them were breathtaking and very well made, though a lot of the same images were recycled (can't be helped in a game like this)
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Oh and basing your rating of a game on their grammar has got to be the most retarded thing I've ever heard, or in this case, read!
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What's with people commenting on this not being a game? It says that in the description!! Just move your eyes just ever so slightly down and READ FOR ONCE!
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I loved the character design for the main character, though it seemed, rich? As in its kind of odd for rice farmers to afford the kind of dress she was wearing, specifically colour. But then again I don't exactly know the time period for this story (plus her younger "brother" wore a green t-shirt?). The music really helped with the atmosphere, and the overall presentation was very good. However, my main problem is with the story. It had a natural mystery that really carried it through, however I thought the dialogue and the grammar could use some work. I'd like to add it was a pleasant surprise finding a lot of quotables as I call them, especially from Une's father. Anyways I'll be looking forward to your next release of the phantomseeds episode/chapter.
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Great game, I loved the artwork and the emotions in it. I kind of liked how the story progressed, and just a note for everyone else, a game doesn't always mean killing the crap out of zombies or whatever, artistic games like this make a difference. It's a great start, although like most people said, maybe more options would be better. You know, pave the path how you want it, instead of having an always sad ending ;) 4/5.
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If you had incorporated some kind of search-based game for your novel, that might have enhanced the experience. Being as how this wasn't a game, I decided to base my rating on your story.
Send your stuff to an editor. It's good at base value, but your grammar is in terrible shape, and it fails to pass the "So what?" factor.
1/5