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Waaaay too much reading for generation X, Y or Z. If things are intuitive, let them be so. Otherwise, simple point form tips are best.
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It seems like a good idea, but it seems like you just employ trial and error until it works, which isn't much fun. Puzzle games work best when you have a solution click and then you watch everything come together, not just flail wildly until it happens to work. Perhaps eliminating the action parts, or simplifying the puzzles to focus on the action would be a better way to go.