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O...kay - so this is an interesting little game - basically emphasising the conversation style of RPGs and dropping the battles... Shame the music isn't very long, but at least it doesn't get annoying (that's a joke, longer music would be good). The artwork is *excellent* though, and I have to give it points for that alone. All in all I find myself intrigued, and wanting...more of the same, but with more... ... ...something. Nice work winterwolves!
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Jeezum crow. If I wanted to read, I'd get a book. There's nothing troggish about wanting to PLAY a game when you're on a game website. 1/5
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zeiva: yes I noticed! I'll post a revised version on newgrounds. Maybe I'll come back here with a zombie game, I'm sure I'll get maximum score :-)
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What a boring story. Good graphics but no interest in ever playing this again. One point so I can get a point for voting.
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Lol, I wonder if you get traumatized by the VN hating people here. This is obviously one of the worse place to post VN.
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Well if you want to see more of this stuff, give me a good rating please, so I get motivated to do more in my free time!
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The art is really good, but it lacks some background music and sounds in general. And, to be honest, more options - either that or you could perhaps state more clearly in your description that there is not THAT much to chose and that it is more a novel than an adventure. To be honest, it seems a bit incoherent in general. Not really my type of game, but sure works for some. :)
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I could have removed the continue button, and nobody would have known about the other part of the game and still this minigame would have made sense, since talks about Heileen small trip.
I wish I could just do all free flash game and make a living with this, but unfortunately isn't just possible.
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There is no conclusion and to continue you have to buy more. That is not the pilot of a tv show. Because the rest of the tv show is also free, but this you have to pay for.
It is a demo.
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Ren'Py visual kinetic novel...... Very very love the arts(the anime-style drawn girls I mean), and I really wish to see (if available) the hentai version as well. If only available...... or by the doujins ^_^
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Also if I get good ratings or many views I plan to release more adventures like this one (done even better with a professional translator).
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Well is not a demo, is a miniadventure. It shares only some characters with my other game, but the settings/story are completely different, so I don't consider it a demo, more like a "pilot" of a tv series.
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i was learning bout the new world in school, really kool thing to learn, but i hated when it waz just a demo. but kool start 4/5
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to conanaras, thanks for the bug! I'll check it.
To the "whiners" well of course there's no action... did you see that I put it under "Adventure" category :)
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Surprised about the "boring" and "no action" comments. Title screen explains it's a VN, so I'm wondering what folks were expecting?
For myself, I thought it was pretty good, but then I enjoy this sort of thing.
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crap.
nothing to do with germany, the girls look swiss, the guy looks hungarian.
The story is lame 1/5 stars for the effort
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A small story bug: chosing the option "I don't want to go see her because she lied to me" in the last choice of action in the game, it says that you see magdalene wearing the silver medallion even if you didnt buy it for her in the town before ;p. Cute game although this demo doesnt actually show how the choices affect the outcome. 4/5
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Looks like the begining of a love affair for the two young ladies. The English is a bit odd in places but not too bad.
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"first the worst second the best third the hairy princess" woo! i rock! pretty lame game but its quite intresting i guess, 3/5