Well there are still some more, I won't write them all since I am not an English expert, but it doesn't mean the ones I fixed had mistakes, and besides it'll take a long time to fix all these mistakes, but so far I am very impressed by your vocabulary and creativity. Keep up the good work! I'm forward to seeing that demo thingy everybody's talking about completed!
Whoops another one. Same quest, Dark Door: "Without waiting for an reply, he continues" When it should be "Without waiting for A reply, he continues". Again, hope I helped =]
Grammar mistake xD - Quest 16 Final Stand - Ice Door it says: "The glow seperates itself from the wall, and combines into a orb" when it should be "The glow seperates itself from the wall, and combines into AN orb" hope I helped :D
@EvilGM in fact you can actually do as followed to be able to transfer your save file to another website or computer: go to - My Computer - whichever letter your hard disk is - Documents and settings - Administrator profile - then click on Tools - Folder Settings and enable viewing hidden files and folders. Once you got that click on Application Data - Macromedia - Flash Player - #SharedObjects - *numbers and letters* and then look for kongregate and copy paste the files you want to your disk on key or other website folder (which must have a previously saved file on the certain game). So there you go hope I helped if you've got any questions about that whisp me ^_^
I totally agree with you Chokechain, I was planning to max my Chain Gun upgrades and just then I suddenly won the game >_<, there should be an option to really continue playing and not continue from a certain stage of the game after you have completed it. One more thing, it would've been nice to see a couple of bosses!
Great game! There has passed a very long time until I played such a great game! 5/5, Could've gotten even higher if it was possible, note that 5 is very rare from me