This is small, incomplete and pathetic. I can’t tell if it is meant to end with the “shoop da whoop lazor” or if you have made programming flaws. The graphics are worse than dire; they are almost nonexistent. The figure drawn is an extremely poor representation of any sort of humanoid. You need to give your drawings sharp edges and realistic figures, plus some shading to give them depth. The interactive aspect is dull. There is no animation at all. There isn’t even any sound. There are so many serious problems with this that some may argue that it breaks the rules because there has been no intentional effort made in this diabolical production. *1 / 5*
It’s getting slightly better. However you’ve used a recycled background which is a shame. The voice acting is also predictable – try using your own voice recorded from a microphone or a video camera edited on windows movie maker. The length still feels the same but you do keep showing some creativity which makes me want to see them through to the end. **2 / 5** / I have already made this comment - do not repost the game again \
It’s getting slightly better. However you’ve used a recycled background which is a shame. The voice acting is also predictable – try using your own voice recorded from a microphone or a video camera edited on windows movie maker. The length still feels the same but you do keep showing some creativity which makes me want to see them through to the end. **2 / 5**
The game is completely unprofessional. The course is as dull as it could get and is disappointing short. The graphics are uncomplicated to the point that I take offense. Please work on some details such as block shading and colourful backgrounds. Also consider animating some of the objects {make them move}. Also there needs to be audio or sound, try looking in the collabs. *1 / 5*
Compact, but actually quite pretty. The speed and difficulty is about right but it should get faster to avoid repetition and boredom. You could include objects which force earlier bounce backs. The overall design works will but the screen is way too small. With limited gameplay and an overused concept you need to bring this alive with plenty more interesting animations and deep rich design implementations to let this stand out from the rest, otherwise it becomes obsolete. You need audio too {music and sound effects} - don’t forget that. **2 / 5**
This shows basic racing programming skills. The laps cannot be cheated {invisible checkpoints} and the course has traversable grass. Graphically it is mediocre, with the exception of the apparent endless green surroundings which are dull and incomplete. The details such as the racing car and course layout have depth and colour; however it looks smeared and pixelated. You’ve also added some track marks which is a sign of competent effort; but it also appears slightly static, try having something animated on the course or show a little bit of wheel movement. The sound track is uplifting but there could have been some variable engine sounds. Focus on the gameplay; add more options {tracks – modes} to take this to the next level. **2 / 5**
It isn't the worst snake game i've seen. The snake itself is animated and colourful plus you've included a background which is admirable. However it needs to include a scoring system and a points leader board. You also need to include sound such as the snake chomping and a game over tune. **2 / 5**
This is dire. There is only one level; you need to make more otherwise it's completely unmemorable. The graphics are terrible and need revamping urgently. Trying making the lines thicker and straighter and use various shading to give them depth and character. Make sure the background is also colourful. Try adding objects which are animated and fix programming errors. Audio is a must.
You have made some small improvements from your first game. The whole screen is filled with things to see and it looks a bit more presentable. The game feels a bit shorter than before but you have included some good deviations including a gun. I noticed the little extra lighting effects which were nice. You also have the gun sounds but it is still needing a little more consistent audio. **2 / 5**
It has some of the basic prerequisites of a good game. The spawns move and fire sensibly, the difficulty is about right and there are sub bosses and big bosses. The graphics are not very good but it would be easy to move forward from here. Try changing the square into something bright and beautiful, like a starship, and remember to animate it. The audio is quite good but you may want to consider have some music. ***3 / 5***
This is completely elementary. The programming suffers from major flaws which include right clicking and moving backwards. It needs a graphical overhaul as it is currently dire. Try making use of the fill tool and spray can for shading in boxes, then imputing the buttons into them. The race track also needs more fill as it is mainly white. If you could create a few miscellaneous animations the game would be far more entertaining. I didn’t hear any sounds either – look for a car engine or a stop and go voice. *1 / 5*
The overall quality is poor, but it was slightly amusing. Most button games have just dialogue, but you’ve implemented an RPG and a story - perhaps you can look into using these talents. You need to work on the graphics though. The white background needs a fresh injection of colour and animation. One suggestion for improvements is to make a multipath button game where you could choose from various buttons or actions. Don’t forget to add sound. *2 / 5*
This is just a simply made, non spectacular snake game. You need to present some stunning visuals that go beyond basic shapes for this to stand out. Add some shading to the circles and create a deep rich background filled with colour and possibly animations. You may also want to add different fruits that have various growth {or shrinking} properties. Also needs sound effects {a chomping sound} and suitable music. *1 / 5*
This is almost as bad as it gets. The problem is that there is no start position for the next level, which means you may end up starting inside of a wall or by the finish button. The game can also be beaten by right clicking and re-clicking in, see a professional programmer for help {search for maze games and contact authors}. You also need to take a real incentive to work on the graphics; simple things make a huge difference. Try drawing the maze in the shape of something or making the poorly drawn lines into neon bars by adding different shades of the same colour. Sound is a must, try some simple music from the audio collabs section. Finally add a background to cover that unnecessary whiteness. Make sure you animate as much as possible. *1 / 5*
The whole quiz is subjective. It is impossible to answer them logically. Also there is no sound; try adding some pleasant music and/or sound effects for correct and incorrect answers. For graphics, make the green boxes prettier by adding different shades of green as either brush strokes or filler. Most importantly add visual spectacles which are well detailed and animated. Consider adding checkpoints if the quiz should get much longer. *1 / 5*
It can't be denied that this is somewhat pathetic. There needs to be more vibrant colours; much like your opening beach background. Consider animating things too. You need to add sound effects for correct and incorrect answers. Implementing checkpoints is a must due to the number of questions {you could offer this as an option in the menu}. But because of a sheer lack of visual detail the whole package is largely unenjoyable. *1 / 5*
This snake works well; appropriate speed and board size. Needs some audio and sound effect upon collection of food. Better graphics are much needed to take this project to the next level. This means adding backgrounds and details which are colourful and animated. **2 / 5**
A fair idea, but the execution is pretty bad. The ball drops too slowly and it is easy to get 249 after a while. Maybe a bigger ball on a bigger screen would add to the challenge. Also there is no sound; but the background is simple and pretty. **2 / 5**