Wow. I usually hate games where there is more dialogue than actual gameplay, but you definitely have your way of snatching the reader. This would be an amazing short story or book. I would read it in a days time. Absolutely amazing.
I do not much like that the ball does different things each time, regardless of if youu move the parts or not. If you tweek it up a bit it will be a very entertaining game. graphics could also help. what did you use to make this game?