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I enjoyed this piece, but perhaps sharing it on Kongregate - a site focused on online gaming - is not the best place. Interaction fiction is wonderful, I hope this goes up on an IF-specific site soon.
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Eh. I appreciate the attempt, but a paragraph of colorful words with some barely-interactive metaphors don't automatically become more than the sum of their parts. If you don't have choice, or even the appearance of choice, you don't have interactivity in any meaningful sense. All you've really got is a few words separated by weak puzzles.
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The writing and visual design is beautiful. The use of gameplay-as-metaphor was a little simplistic, considering the complexity of the issues taken up.
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*sigh* Here's a tip: first screen, chase all the brown clouds away with your mouse. I think you should be able to figure the rest out by yourself.
Great game, very interesting. I've been through, or rather I suppose I'm going through, the same thing sort of thing. 4/5
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Interesting. I think the "pretentious" comment is getting to the point in that the pronoun "I" tends to feel so dominate that "we" can't participate.
But I like it. "Games" like this make me want to create flash stories.
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I like these games that are artistic, and I'm enjoying the short but relatively deep ones that there are more of appearing.