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The game looks nice and the concept is great (Pixel games are great anyway). But there is one problem. It seemed to me that it was cut off at the side. In the labyrinth level I realized that it was cut off on all sides. I thought that I could solve the problem by right clicking and clicking show all. But after right clicking I couldn't do anything anymore. I had to open the taskmanager to close my browser. This should not happen.
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It's okay, it has nice presentation but after that the mini games aren't much fun and offer no way to change the story or any kind of reward.
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Heh...pretty nice..asking for more would be asking you to tell us your personal life, perhaps that is too much. I really loved it. A very original way to let others see into your mind. For a minute we feel so close to you, yet we are so far away. Really nice Thanks for sharing :)
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I enjoyed this piece, but perhaps sharing it on Kongregate - a site focused on online gaming - is not the best place. Interaction fiction is wonderful, I hope this goes up on an IF-specific site soon.
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Eh. I appreciate the attempt, but a paragraph of colorful words with some barely-interactive metaphors don't automatically become more than the sum of their parts. If you don't have choice, or even the appearance of choice, you don't have interactivity in any meaningful sense. All you've really got is a few words separated by weak puzzles.
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The writing and visual design is beautiful. The use of gameplay-as-metaphor was a little simplistic, considering the complexity of the issues taken up.
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*sigh* Here's a tip: first screen, chase all the brown clouds away with your mouse. I think you should be able to figure the rest out by yourself.
Great game, very interesting. I've been through, or rather I suppose I'm going through, the same thing sort of thing. 4/5
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Interesting. I think the "pretentious" comment is getting to the point in that the pronoun "I" tends to feel so dominate that "we" can't participate.
But I like it. "Games" like this make me want to create flash stories.
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I like these games that are artistic, and I'm enjoying the short but relatively deep ones that there are more of appearing.