The cut scenes are not dramatic, they are overly long and a bit boring. Why is the professor's English so poor? Is English supposed to be his second language?
The battle tutorial is a bit unclear. It says you can only send troops once per turn, but I think you are trying to say that once you send troops, you cannot send troops again until the ones previously sent either die or make it to the right side of the screen.
Is there a point to using anything but the chaingun? When people get too close, bullets don't hit them and they move at your speed, so you can never get the necessary range. A bit simple, but has some potential.
Game mechanics need work. I randomly encounter enemies I cannot defeat on the second screen. If I flee, it costs gold. I need gold to buy potions, which are apparently the only way to heal. It certainly looks like I will fairly soon get to the point where it is impossible to progress. Also, the section on the bottom right should show the most recent event. Having to scroll down every time something happens gets tiresome fast. Finally, I realize English is not your first language, but you should really have someone proofread your text, it is pretty bad.
Nicely done. The story is pretty good, but I missed parts of it because the text isn't up for very long. I'm curious why you have the hiragana for uyu on one of the Aru ships?
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